Phân tích "Many people are optimistic of the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you share their optimism? What changes would you like to see in the new century?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Many people are optimistic of the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you share their optimism? What changes would you like to see in the new century?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Many people are optimistic of the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you share their optimism? What changes would you like to see in the new century?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 - AGREE 
    • Main idea 1: Rapid developments in technology have the potential to address pressing global challenges. 
      • Supporting idea: Innovations in renewable energy, healthcare, artificial intelligence, and communication can significantly improve the quality of life, promote sustainability, and foster positive social change. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Word form của từ "sustainable" tiếng anh
      • Example: 
        • Solar panels can provide clean and affordable electricity to homes and businesses, reducing our reliance on fossil fuels and harmful emissions.
        • Artificial intelligence (AI) is being used to develop new diagnostic tools and treatments for diseases. For example, AI-powered machines can now detect cancer cells with greater accuracy than human doctors.
        • Social media platforms are being used to connect people from all over the world and share information and ideas. This can help to promote understanding and tolerance between different cultures.
    • Main idea 2: There is a growing awareness and concern for social and environmental issues. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • People are becoming more conscious of the impact of their actions and are demanding sustainable practices, social justice, and equality. 
        • This collective consciousness can drive positive changes in policies, behaviors, and attitudes. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "behavior" & "misbehavior" 
      • Example: 
        • More and more businesses are adopting corporate social responsibility (CSR) initiatives. These initiatives are designed to improve the social and environmental impact of businesses. For example, many companies are now offsetting their carbon emissions and donating to social causes.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: Addressing climate change, protecting ecosystems, and transitioning to clean energy sources are crucial for a sustainable future.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Climate change poses significant risks to the environment, ecosystems, and human well-being. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "environment" tiếng anh 
        • By addressing climate change, we can minimize the severity of extreme weather events, rising sea levels, loss of biodiversity, and other detrimental consequences.
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Resolving conflicts through diplomacy, fostering understanding among nations, and promoting peaceful coexistence are essential for a harmonious world.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Conflict often leads to violence, displacement of populations, and immense human suffering. 
        • Resolving conflicts peacefully helps prevent the loss of lives, destruction of infrastructure, and the displacement of communities. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "infrastructure" tiếng anh 
      • Example: The United Nations is an international organization that was established in 1945 to maintain international peace and security, to develop friendly relations among nations, and to promote social progress, better living standards, and human rights. The UN has played a major role in resolving conflicts around the world, such as the Korean War, the Vietnam War, and the Gulf War.

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