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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: raising costs will certainly limit people’s use of sugary foods. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Because sugary foods are inexpensive, many individuals consume far too much of them. 
        • If the governments decide to impose higher tax on the unhealthy food items, the manufacturing companies will have to increase the price of the products. As a result, these sugary products will be less popular among people.
        • Most of the multinational companies which produce high sugar drinks such as Coca-Cola, Sprite, 7-up and so on usually make sure that their products are much cheaper than other available drinks. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "product" tiếng anh 
      • Example: For example, in the United States, many fast-food establishments provide free drink refills. Hence, people frequently order two or three drinks with their meals. If these eateries were obliged to impose a 20% tax on these beverages and stop providing free refills, many customers probably wouldn’t order more than one.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea:  sugary foods are highly perilous since they lead to obesity and diabetes
      • Supporting idea:  Therefore, increasing the price of these harmful drinks and making people aware of the health hazards would encourage customers to make better purchase decisions.
      • Example: 

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