Phân tích "Many inventions by humans are considered revolutionary (e.g. wheel). Some people think that the most important invention is the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Many inventions by humans are considered revolutionary (e.g. wheel). Some people think that the most important invention is the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• PARTLY AGREE với quan điểm đề cho:  The Internet has certainly had a significant impact on the world, but it is just one of many inventions that have shaped human history.
  • Body 1: Quan điểm đề cho có ý đúng 
    • Main idea: On one hand, the Internet has certainly had a transformative impact on the world, revolutionizing the way we communicate, work, and access information.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • It has connected people from all over the world and enabled instant communication and sharing of ideas, fostering global collaboration and innovation. 
        • The Internet has also created new industries and economic opportunities, driving the growth of e-commerce, digital marketing, and online education.
      • Example: An example to illustrate the transformative impact of the Internet is how it has changed the way people access and consume news. Before the Internet, people relied mainly on newspapers, television, and radio to get their news. With the rise of the Internet, however, news is now available 24/7 through websites, social media, and other online platforms. 
  • Body 2: Nhưng không phải các inventions khác không quan trọng
    • Main idea: On the other hand, there have been countless other inventions throughout human history that have also had a profound impact on society >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "throughout" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: These inventions have shaped the way people live, work, and interact with one another.
      • Example: 
        • For example, the wheel, which was invented thousands of years ago, allowed for the development of transportation and enabled the creation of new trade routes and markets. 
        • The printing press, invented in the 15th century, made it possible to mass-produce books and disseminate knowledge more widely than ever before, sparking the Renaissance and the Scientific Revolution >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ "POSSIBLE" tiếng anh

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