Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Thi máy 4/4/2022).
I. Đề bài
Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
- Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm ”Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods” >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Cách paraphrase từ "reduce" tiếng anh
- Main idea 1: supermarkets and manufacturers are responsible for using less packaging because they are the ones who have instituted unnecessary packaging on a large scale >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng & word form của "responsible"
- Supporting idea: supermarkets or retailers should offer discounts to customers who purchase either products with disposable and eco-friendly package or ones without package.
- Example: In recent years, some major supermarket chains, such as Tesco in the UK and Carrefour in France, have taken steps to reduce unnecessary packaging by introducing "bring your own container" initiatives. These programs allow customers to purchase items like grains, pasta, and detergents in bulk, reducing plastic waste. Additionally, in countries like Germany, retailers offer discounts to customers who bring reusable containers or choose products with minimal packaging, encouraging sustainable shopping habits.
- Main idea 2: many consumers have very little awareness about the negative impacts that the excessive amounts of product packaging are having on the environment >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt cách dùng impact như động từ & danh từ
- Supporting idea: Therefore, manufacturers and supermarkets need to minimise the amount of plastic packaging that is used to store and sell their products, or preferably use only biodegradable, recyclable, or environmentally friendly materials. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "preferred" "preferable" & "preferably" tiếng anh
- Example: For example, in Vietnam, many supermarkets and convenience stores frequently package fresh produce, such as bananas and cucumbers, in plastic trays wrapped with additional plastic film, even though these items have natural protective layers.
- Main idea 1: supermarkets and manufacturers are responsible for using less packaging because they are the ones who have instituted unnecessary packaging on a large scale >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng & word form của "responsible"
- Body 2: Viết về quan điểm ”Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging” & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "avoid" tiếng anh
- Main idea 1: Customers can avoid buying over-packaged goods, making consumer pressure on manufacturers and sellers >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Cách paraphrase "customers" tiếng anh
- By boycotting certain products from companies who are not being environmentally responsible, consumers can put pressure on these companies to change their attitude towards the materials that they use to package their products. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the more people are likely to buy goods with over-packaging, the more they are manufactured. In contrast, if consumers lower the purchase of such items, it would definitely decrease their production) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "likely" tiếng anh
- Companies will be forced to act more environmentally responsible by changing and reducing product packaging.
- Example: many supermarkets and restaurants now use fewer plastic containers and use more recycle paper under consumer pressure. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt LESS và FEWER tiếng anh
- Main idea 2: customers should start avoiding such unnecessary over packing of products >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "SUCH" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- Many people prefer over-packaged products as they believe more packaging can protect products like foods from contamination and give them a more hygienic feeling. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "believe" tiếng anh
- Unless consumer behaviour changes, the amount of packaging of goods will be increasing, let alone reducing it.
- Example: For instance, in Japan, it is common to see individually wrapped bananas or oranges, which increases plastic consumption unnecessarily. Unless consumers actively choose to buy loose produce instead of over-packaged alternatives, the demand for excessive packaging will continue to rise, making it harder to reduce plastic waste.
- Supporting idea:
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm ”Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods” >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Cách paraphrase từ "reduce" tiếng anh
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The issue of excessive packaging has sparked debate, with some arguing that manufacturers (nhà sản xuất - companies that produce goods) and supermarkets should take responsibility for reducing it, while others believe that consumers (người tiêu dùng - people who buy goods and services) should avoid purchasing over-packaged goods. While both sides have valid points, I contend that the onus primarily lies with customers.
On the one hand, supermarkets and manufacturers should be held accountable for the prevalence (sự phổ biến - the fact of being widespread or common) of excessive packaging. They have long prioritized (đặt lên hàng đầu - to treat something as more important than others) aesthetic appeal and convenience over environmental concerns, leading to an overabundance (sự dư thừa - an excessive quantity) of plastic and non-biodegradable materials. To address this issue, retailers could offer incentives (động lực khuyến khích - rewards or benefits to encourage a particular action) such as discounts for customers who opt for products with minimal packaging. Moreover, many individuals remain oblivious (không nhận thức được - unaware or ignorant) to the detrimental environmental effects of excessive packaging, reinforcing the necessity for businesses to switch to biodegradable (phân hủy sinh học - capable of being broken down naturally) and recyclable (có thể tái chế - able to be processed and used again) materials.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
On the other hand, customers have a pivotal role in mitigating packaging waste. By boycotting (tẩy chay - refusing to buy products from a company as a form of protest) products from brands that fail to implement eco-friendly packaging, patrons (khách hàng - customers, especially regular ones) can exert pressure on businesses to adopt sustainable practices. The correlation (mối quan hệ - a connection between two or more things) between consumer demand and product availability suggests that if more individuals actively avoid over-packaged goods, companies will be compelled to make changes. For instance, many supermarkets and restaurants have shifted towards using compostable (có thể phân hủy tự nhiên - capable of breaking down naturally without harming the environment) packaging in response to public demand. Furthermore, unless purchasing habits evolve, the proliferation (sự gia tăng nhanh chóng - rapid growth or spread) of unnecessary packaging will persist, exacerbating the environmental crisis.
In conclusion, while businesses should take steps to reduce packaging waste, the ultimate responsibility falls on consumers, as their purchasing decisions have the potential to drive meaningful change.
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