Phân tích"Some countries have introduced laws to limit working hours for employees. Why are these laws introduced? Do you think they are a positive or negative development?"(kèm bài sửa) (Đề thi 20/2/2023)

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Some countries have introduced laws to limit working hours for employees. Why are these laws introduced? Do you think they are a positive or negative development?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 Why are these laws introduced? 
    • Main idea: Putting a cap on working hours has enabled employees to find some time for themselves and thus benefitted their health (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: to keep its citizens stress free and healthy, the government has to introduce stringent laws to cap the number of hours they can work)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Prolonged working hours have been on the rise for many years, resulting in a growing number of employees developing health issues related to work pressure >> long working hours lead to many early deaths from heart diseases >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu "TẤT TẦN TẬT" TỪ A ĐẾN Z TỪ VỰNG VỀ BỆNH DỊCH
        • Laws to limit working hours leave an individual with abundant leisure time to spend with family and pursue hobbies >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng topic Hobbies / Interests
      • Example: Enacted in the year 2000, France maintains a law capping the weekly working hours at 35, a measure acknowledged for its role in enhancing the well-being of French workers.

  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 Do you think they are a positive or negative development? POSITIVE - Defined working hours laws are a positive development as they prove advantageous to employees and employers.
    • Main idea 1: (Xét employees) When people work for a limited number of hours, they enjoy their life as well as their work >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng AS WELL AS và AS WELL trong tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: reducing working hours helps employees devote their spare time to their family and friends, thereby establishing a healthy personal and professional life.
      • Example: Situated in the North Atlantic Ocean, Iceland, a Nordic nation, introduced a 35-hour workweek in 2015 through a pilot program encompassing 2,500 workplaces and involving over 2,500 employees, with the outcomes proving positive as employees reported heightened productivity, improved work-life balance, reduced stress, and greater job satisfaction.

    • Main idea 2: (Xét Employers) Employers are also benefited as employees working for fewer hours are happier and generate more output.
      • Supporting idea:  It enhances their performance and job loyalty which benefits employers.
      • Example: A study by the University of Warwick in the United Kingdom found that employees who worked shorter hours were 13% more productive than those who worked longer hours.

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