Phân tích "It is the responsibility of schools to teach children good behavior in addition to provide formal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "It is the responsibility of schools to teach children good behavior in addition to provide formal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

It is the responsibility of schools to teach children good behavior in addition to provide formal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Firstly, schools are a child's first formal environment outside the home. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • They provide an opportunity for children to interact with others, learn social skills, and develop healthy relationships. 
        • Schools should teach children about appropriate behavior in different contexts, such as respecting others, showing empathy, and resolving conflicts peacefully. 
        • These lessons not only benefit the children's social and emotional well-being but also help create a positive and productive learning environment.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng BENEFIT (động từ, danh từ) & BENEFICIAL
      • Example: For example, a school may have a lesson on showing respect for others, where students are taught about the importance of using polite language and listening to others.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Secondly, schools are uniquely positioned to identify behavioral problems in children and provide timely interventions.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Children may struggle with emotional and behavioral issues, which can affect their academic performance and social relationships.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Phân biệt "Affect,Effect & influence" tiếng anh
        • Schools can play an important role in identifying such issues and providing appropriate support, such as counseling or therapy. 
        • These interventions can help children overcome their behavioral problems and develop good behavior, ultimately benefiting their academic and personal growth.
      • Example: A teacher may refer a student struggling with anger management to a school counselor or therapist who can identify underlying causes and provide appropriate interventions, such as cognitive-behavioral therapy.

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