Phân tích "It is suggested that everyone should have a car, a TV and a fridge. Do the advantages of this development for society outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "It is suggested that everyone should have a car, a TV and a fridge. Do the advantages of this development for society outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

It is suggested that everyone should have a car, a TV and a fridge. Do the advantages of this development for society outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: The greater productivity is the more industrial waste that manufacturing plants release to the environment.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "productivity" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Consumers who dump cars or TV sets which are still in use should be to blame for.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
        • The use of cars is often held responsible for environmental pollution because exhaust emissions from automobiles impair the air quality and consequently affect people’s health.
        • Using fridges and televisions also places pressure on electricity supply in the world when the growing use of these devices in the home merely compounds the problem of insufficient electricity that has become intractable in many parts of the world.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase "productivity" 
      • Example: 
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: material pursuit affects consumers negatively. 
      • Supporting idea: Today the youth’s perception of happiness has been also distorted in such way, which tempts them to commit wrong-doings to own the latest model of a necessity.
      • Example: For example, being obsessed and seduced by its fabulous model, people do not hesitate to purchase a new car without giving it a second thought. 
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1:  It promotes national economy and society. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the rise of the consumer society stimulates economic growth)
        • Supporting idea: 
          • By changing the model of their cars for example, customers nowadays seem to be boosting production process, which creates huge profits for companies.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The increasing sales figures for cars and household equipment are often associated with more jobs and wealth being created for society)
          • These enterprises therefore have to employ more labors to meet consumers’ demand, as well as pay tax for government.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "study" tiếng anh
          • Such taxation in turn is used to build public facilities to improve living standard.
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: Convenience and accessibility 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Owning a car provides mobility and independence, allowing individuals to travel freely and conveniently.  
          • Having a TV offers entertainment, information, and educational content, while a fridge enables food storage and preservation, reducing waste and ensuring a steady food supply.
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: the greater productivity is the more industrial waste that manufacturing plants release to the environment. 
        • Supporting idea: Consumers who dump cars or TV sets which are still in use should be to blame for.
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: material pursuit affects consumers negatively. 
        • Supporting idea: Today the youth’s perception of happiness has been also distorted in such way, which tempts them to commit wrong-doings to own the latest model of a necessity.
        • Example: For example, being obsessed and seduced by its fabulous model, people do not hesitate to purchase a new car without giving it a second thought.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng & Word form của "boost"
  • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm ideas khác: 
    • Main idea: People can have a higher standard of living than before. 
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Travelling on the road is no longer tedious because individuals can sit in a car, listening to music and enjoying the comfort of air conditioning. 
      • In the same way, people may watch television to relax or to gain knowledge, and fridges help them preserve food longer without being stale.

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