Phân tích"The table below gives information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in 2 cities in May 2007"IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

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The table below gives information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in 2 cities in May 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng gì: mixed (table + table)
• Chủ ngữ của bài: the temperatures and hours of daylight in two cities during the same weekend in May 2007.
• Chia thì gì, vì sao: quá khứ 2007 >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn CÁCH CHIA THÌ IELTS WRITING TASK 1
• Câu Overall: 
  • Mỗi bảng 1 câu 
    • In Mumbai, the temperatures recorded over three consecutive days were relatively consistent, whereas those in Moscow witnessed significant changes >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt However/ Whereas
    • Despite being warmer, Mumbai enjoyed fewer hours of daylight compared to Moscow.
• Bố cục cách viết 2 đoạn thân bài:
  • Body 1: bảng India 
    • The temperatures were nearly the same from Friday to Sunday, with the highest figure being 33⁰C and the lowest one being 29⁰C >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "figure" tiếng anh 
    • The average number of daylight hours was approximately 13 hours, with the sun often rising at about 6 am >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Cách paraphrase từ "approximately" trong IELTS
  • Body 2: bảng Russia
    • The maximums of the temperatures were 8, 10 and 13 degrees in Friday, Saturday and Sunday respectively >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng & paraphrase "respectively"/ "respective"
    • Moscow recorded tremendously cold days at around 2 to 8 degrees. 
    • The average number of daylight hours in this city was more than 18 hours, from around 4.15 am to 10 pm.

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