Phân tích"The chart below gives information about how many European citizens of various age groups who frequently go to the gym from 1990 to 2010 "IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi 22/10/2022)

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The chart below gives information about how many European citizens of various age groups who frequently go to the gym from 1990 to 2010.

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  • Overall:
    • The 24-33 age bracket almost always topped the chart.
    • The proportion of young adults was higher than that of middle-aged ones.
    • The patterns for the two younger groups were similar within the first 8 years but different afterwards  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The proportion of European citizens working out at the gym in the four age brackets demonstrate a rising trend except for the oldest group, aged 44-53)
  • Body 1: Viết về 18-23 & 24-33 
    • From 1990 to 1998:
      • The figure for the 18-23 age range started at 15% and rose marginally before declining back to 16%. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "Marginally" tiếng anh
      • Similarly, the percentage of 24-to-33-year-olds rose from a starting point of 17% to 23% and fell back to 20%. 
    • After 1998: 
      • The first group grew substantially but then shrank again (nêu số liệu) 
      • For the second group, however, there was a steady increase to a peak of over 25%.
  • Body 2: Viết về 34-43 & 44-53
    • In 1990, gym goers aged 34 – 43 and 44 – 53 held 7% and 5%, respectively, and after 4 years of stability, both groups experienced a minimal increase until 1998. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The figures for older groups, aged 34-43 and 44-53, stay unchanged at around 5% between 1990 and 1994)
    • While the former continued to grow and peaked at 10% in 2010, the latter slightly dipped to approximately 7% in this year >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "approximately" trong IELTS

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