Phân tích "In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. 

Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. 

What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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  • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
    • Main idea 1: Students are able to escape the distractions of family life, and thereby establish study routines and form friendships with other students who find themselves in the same situation.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "parent" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: These factors may help them in their studies.
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    • Main idea 2: One obvious positive aspect is fostering independence in terms of running a household and providing oneself with some basic necessities such as laundry and cooking meals. 
      • Supporting idea: Not only are these skills an essential stage in the maturing process, but they are also the key to success in surviving in modern concrete jungles.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "essential" tiếng anh
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  • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
    • Main idea 1: One disadvantage is having to find accommodation  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Students from other countries have to stay in dormitory accommodation or rent a room off campus in order to complete their study)
      • Supporting idea: Universities are often located in major urban centres, where rents are high if students have to find a room with even the basic facilities.
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    • Main idea 2: Such early entering into adulthood is sometimes believed to be stressful, therefore, requiring gradual adaptation. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Mature as freshmen may seem, they still have strong bonding with their parents, which makes them homesick and emotionally unstable  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "role" tiếng anh
        • Being unexperienced in real life, young people might be vulnerable to issues they are likely to encounter in a new place, for instance, fraud or other criminal activities.
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