Phân tích"In the future, robots may do the work of the human. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 20/10/22 (computer))

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In the future, robots may do the work of the human. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (advantages>disadvantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
      • Main idea: At work, there are a range of responsibilities being carried out by humans that could be done by robots ranging from the transportation of goods and photocopying to slightly more robust tasks such as data input and security.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "role" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:  
        • They can be very accurate – to fractions of an inch
        • Robots can work in environments which are unsafe for humans – in the nuclear or chemical industries for example
        • As artificial intelligence becomes more self-sufficient it is likely that companies will be able to increase efficiency and humans can prioritise the areas where they most excel  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng & word form của "responsible"
      • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
        • Main idea: In homes, robots may be able to take over chores such as washing the dishing and cleaning, freeing up individuals to focus on more pleasurable pastimes.
        • Supporting idea: Automated robots can complete chores much faster and efficiently than humans, allowing individuals to reclaim precious time for leisure, hobbies, or spending quality time with family and friends.
        • Example: Automated vacuum cleaners are a great example of how robots can complete chores faster and more efficiently than humans. Instead of manually vacuuming your floors, you can simply program your robot vacuum cleaner to do it for you. This can free up your time so that you can focus on other things, such as spending time with your loved ones, pursuing your hobbies, or simply relaxing.

• Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
  • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
  • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
    • Main idea 1: At work, there are a range of responsibilities being carried out by humans that could be done by robots ranging from the transportation of goods and photocopying to slightly more robust tasks such as data input and security.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "consist" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:  As artificial intelligence becomes more self-sufficient it is likely that companies will be able to increase efficiency and humans can prioritise the areas where they most excel
      • Example: For example, a customer service chatbot could be used to answer simple questions about product availability, shipping times, and return policies. This would allow human customer service representatives to focus on more complex issues, such as troubleshooting technical problems or resolving disputes.
    • Main idea 2: In homes, the situation is similar as robots may be able to take over chores such as washing the dishing and cleaning, freeing up individuals to focus on more pleasurable pastimes.
      • Supporting idea: Automated robots can complete chores much faster and efficiently than humans, allowing individuals to reclaim precious time for leisure, hobbies, or spending quality time with family and friends.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: Automated vacuum cleaners are a great example of how robots can complete chores faster and more efficiently than humans. Instead of manually vacuuming your floors, you can simply program your robot vacuum cleaner to do it for you. This can free up your time so that you can focus on other things, such as spending time with your loved ones, pursuing your hobbies, or simply relaxing.
  • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
    • Main idea 1: A rise in the number of robots will lead to a concomitant decrease in human relations
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The pervasiveness of online life can serve as a warning that humanity is only too willing to subsist on one-way, inauthentic relationships.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ"duty"tiếng anh

        • When people interact with customer service robots, they often miss the personal connection that human customer service representatives provide due to robots' limited ability to understand and respond to human emotions, potentially leading to feelings of isolation and disconnection.

    • Main idea 2: The use of robots can create economic problems if they replace human jobs
      • Supporting idea: 
        • When robots take over tasks previously performed by humans, it can lead to significant job displacement. 
        • Workers in industries heavily affected by automation may lose their livelihoods, leading to unemployment and financial instability.
• IELTS TUTOR gợi ý các disadvantages khác:
  • Main idea: Although robots can be superior to humans in some ways, they are less dextrous than humans, they don’t have such powerful brains, and cannot compete with a human’s ability to understand what they can see.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  So sánh bội số 
  • Main idea: Often robots are very costly – in terms of the initial cost, maintenance, the need for extra components and the need to be programmed to do the task.

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