Phân tích"In the future, it is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people in some countries. Is this positive or negative development?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Thi giấy 2/4/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"In the future, it is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people in some countries. Is this positive or negative development?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Thi giấy 2/4/2022)

In the future, it is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people in some countries. Is this positive or negative development?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng positive):
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao positive 
    • Main idea: seniors possess abundant experience and as such they can offer valuable advice to young people  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "advise" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: Seniors have lived through various life experiences, including successes and failures, and have gained wisdom from these experiences that can guide and inspire younger generations.
    • Example: Ruth Bader Ginsburg, a brilliant U.S. Supreme Court Justice from 1993 until her passing in 2020, was a passionate advocate for gender equality and a role model who offered valuable advice to young people on achieving their goals
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao positive 
    • Main idea: an increase in the number of old people means a greater pool of volunteers for community and government projects.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "advice" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: here are groups of elderly people established to provide free education for poverty-hit children or to clean the environment.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  CÁCH PARAPHRASE TỪ "ADVISE" TIẾNG ANH
    • Example: For example, we often see old people in developed countries engage in charity work to provide shelter and food for the homeless in their neighborhoods. 

Các khóa học IELTS online 1 kèm 1 - 100% cam kết đạt target 6.0 - 7.0 - 8.0

>> IELTS Intensive Writing - Sửa bài chi tiết

>> IELTS Intensive Listening

>> IELTS Intensive Reading

>> IELTS Cấp tốc