Phân tích "In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.

Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (advantages>disadvantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
      • Main idea: Adopting autonomous vehicles will enhance safety to a great extent  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: automated vehicles has a slim chance of getting involve to an accident caused by human error)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "improve" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: 
          • These vehicles will be equipped with a wide range of advance technologies to allow vehicles run safely. 
          • These vehicles use laser radar, infrared radar, as well as cameras, sophisticated motion sensors, extremely accurate GPS (global positioning system), and complex algorithms in a system whereby all automobiles are automatically updated on the presence of other automobiles.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "strengthen" tiếng anh
          • This will mean that incidents like the destruction of drunk driving, impaired driving, unbelted vehicle occupants, distraction and speeding become a matter of the past, thus saving hundreds of thousands of lives every year. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: These hands-free driving cars can improve traffic flows or lessen deaths and physical injuries)
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
      • Main idea: driver-less automated cars will offer more spare time and improved productivity. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn  Cách dùng & Word form của "boost"
        • Supporting idea:  
          • Without the need to drive, individuals will be able to be more productive while travelling by car in lieu of keeping their eyes on the street all the time
          • The technology these vehicles use would make certain that they optimize their routes to avoid traffic congestion, which would not just save time for the working population but cut emissions caused by idling engines.  >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "regulate" tiếng anh
        • Example: 
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: Adopting autonomous vehicles will enhance safety to a great extent (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: automated vehicles has a slim chance of getting involve to an accident caused by human error) 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • These vehicles will be equipped with a wide range of advance technologies to allow vehicles run safely. 
          • These vehicles use laser radar, infrared radar, as well as cameras, sophisticated motion sensors, extremely accurate GPS (global positioning system), and complex algorithms in a system whereby all automobiles are automatically updated on the presence of other automobiles.  
          • This will mean that incidents like the destruction of drunk driving, impaired driving, unbelted vehicle occupants, distraction and speeding become a matter of the past, thus saving hundreds of thousands of lives every year. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: These hands-free driving cars can improve traffic flows or lessen deaths and physical injuries)
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: driver-less automated cars will offer more spare time and improved productivity.  
        • Supporting idea:  
          • Without the need to drive, individuals will be able to be more productive while travelling by car in lieu of keeping their eyes on the street all the time.
          • The technology these vehicles use would make certain that they optimize their routes to avoid traffic congestion, which would not just save time for the working population but cut emissions caused by idling engines.   
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea: Detractors of driver-free vehicles point out the potential unreliability of such vehicles.
        • Supporting idea: Specifically, some worry that when there is a technical problem such as a malfunction of the navigation system, this may jeopardize passengers in both the vehicle and traffic  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "jeopardize" 
        • Example: Tesla, a prominent corporation specializing in driverless automobiles, has received a number of complaints regarding the reliability of its driverless cars, making some skeptical about whether such cars are sophisticated enough to work consistently in varying weather and road conditions.

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