Phân tích "In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.

Why is this the case?

What can be done about this problem?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: Growing overpopulation is another factor that has contributed to food scarcity. 
      • Supporting idea: As the world’s population grows every day, there aren’t enough crops cultivated to feed them.
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Another factor that has contributed to food scarcity or famine is food waste.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Consumers are failing to make a detailed plan of what they are going to buy before they shop   (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the excess food is brought about by a lack of appropriate planning because customers fail to make a plan of when and where to have a party)
        • Their shopping carts are often full of food products that they might never use.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   Cách dùng danh từ"product"tiếng anh
        • They may delay and put away all the food into the fridge, resulting in the expiry of the food after which they are thrown as waste.
        • Those in extreme poverty may find it hard to feed themselves more than once a day because of increased prices
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: The government should impose strict regulations to control the growth of population.
      • Supporting idea: 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2:  The immediate measure for customers is to buy and prepare food with a plan so as to use up all the food on the plate. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   Paraphrase từ"product"(Diễn đạt"hàng hoá"tiếng anh)
      • Supporting idea: This would help consumers to have time to prepare carefully and decide wisely what food items should be bought, which would prevent a great deal of food from being thrown away. 
      • Example: 
  • Nếu viết nguyên nhân của vấn đề trên do global warming thì IELTS TUTOR gợi ý các solutions sau:
    • It is necessary to send more experienced scientists and experts in the field of agriculture to regions frequently suffering from climate change so that they can do more research and find the most effective methods to improve food production in these areas. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   Cách dùng từ "expertise" tiếng anh
    • Early warning systems for extreme events should be improved so that farmers have enough time to prepare for those events and take necessary actions to save their crops. 

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