Phân tích "In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words. 

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• Dạng advantages & disadvantages có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: A gap year will provide students with the opportunity to reassess their strengths and weaknesses, helping them determine the direction of their plans for the upcoming years (IELTS TUTOR giải thích: gap year sẽ cho học sinh cơ hội để nhận định lại điểm mạnh điểm yếu để định hướng kế hoạch tiếp theo trong những năm sắp tới của học sinh là gì)
        • Supporting idea: 
          • A gap year allows students to step back from the academic environment and explore different aspects of themselves. 
          • Through travel, work, or volunteering experiences, they can discover their passions, interests, and strengths that may not be evident in a traditional classroom setting.
        • Example: 
          • In some countries such as Vietnam, the majority of high school students are clueless about the major of study to pursue.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   Cách dùng - paraphrase & word form của từ "aspire" 
          • Such a problem could be solved if high school leavers have one year off dedicated to travelling and new experiences, which enables them to explore their fields of interest to make a wise educational decision. 
      • Main idea 2: gap year giúp học sinh có cơ hội học hỏi những điểm mới lạ, thực tế hơn là vùi đầu vào sách vở và kiến thức giáo khoa  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: A gap year is an ideal opportunity for students to learn about what is not taught at university)
        • Supporting idea:
          • Working with other people who are experts in a particular field can give these newcomers not only an understanding of the job but also valuable practical lessons to help them become more mature.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   Cách dùng tính từ"practical"tiếng anh 
          • When it comes to applying for a position in a company, employers tend to favourably consider applicants who possess extensive experience in life and the occupation.
    • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý các ý khác: 
      • Main idea: Having a year to relax can be advantageous as students can have a chance to relieve stress in study. 
      • Supporting idea: With a comfortable and willing attitude, undergraduates can acquire knowledge more effectively in comparison with those who go to university right away
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: taking some time off for travel and work before starting university life may discourage some students from continuing their study later on
        • Supporting idea:
          • It is understandably almost impossible for young people to enjoy their experiences in doing a job or travelling to a new place but still arrange a certain amount of time for revision.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "sort" tiếng anh 
          • As a result, gap-year takers may have to face the challenge of becoming familiar with the knowledge at school again, receiving more pressure of catching up with their peers.
      • Main idea 2:  the life outside the university campus may prove to be mentally and physically overwhelming for inexperienced school leavers. 
        • Supporting idea: If not well prepared for such possible obstacles, young high school graduates can suffer from unintended consequences.
        • Example: They, for instance, may be at risk of being exploited in an exhausting job or face potential dangers on their trips to a new country. 

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