Phân tích "In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: (Viết về less fit) children are more exposed to technology and hence, they end up spending their time at home, without doing any physical work.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • They live a sedentary life since they spend most of their time playing computer games or watching televisions, which can eventually create a detrimental impact on their health. ( IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: They spend most of their time watching television or playing video games on a computer)
        • This technological advancement has reduced the level of physical activity in this specific age group >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "level" tiếng anh 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: (Viết về fatter) as fast food joints are ubiquitous in every city, children end up eating a lot of junk foods. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn  Cách dùng tính từ "ubiquitous" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • These items are mostly prepared using a lot of oil, which can lead to various diseases like obesity. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý  Paraphrase từ "lead to" tiếng anh
        • This has a negative impact on the health of young people who consume them regularly. 
      • Example: renowned food stalls like KFC and Burger King serve oily items like burgers and fried chickens in their meal box. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "item" tiếng anh 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: The government can make sports mandatory in school curriculum, which will not only help children to feel rejuvenated but also enable them to become fit.
      • Supporting idea: If schools conduct tournaments and events frequently, it will encourage their students to indulge in physical activities. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "encourage" tiếng anh
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: the authorities should impose restrictions / curbs on food joints
      • Supporting idea: 
      • Example: the well-known restaurant Taco Bell has a famous children's meal where they serve items like custard and chicken salad, which are beneficial for health.

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