Bên cạnh HƯỚNG DẪN TỪNG BƯỚC CÁCH LÀM BÀI TẬP MẪU IELTS READING DẠNG FILL IN THE GAP, IELTS TUTOR cung cấp Phân tích đề"In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores" IELTS WRITING
I. Đề bài
In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng topic BUSINESS IELTS
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Đối với dạng outweigh cách dễ nhất nên theo hướng TOTALLY 1 phía, bên cạnh đó bài này đề bài hơi dài dòng cần phân tích kĩ để tìm ra đề đang yêu cầu gìì
- Đề bài ghi "In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars" như vậy:
- Đề bài yêu cầu liệu mặt lợi của việc "people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores" là lớn hơn mặt hại không?
- Những câu còn lại "In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business" & "As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars" đều là các câu context của đề bài >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "result" tiếng anh
- Đề bài này nếu theo hướng disadvantageges > advantages thì sẽ bố cục bài như sau (IELTS TUTOR giải thích: nên chọn theo hướng này vì đề đã có sẵn 2 main idea để gợi ý)
- Intro câu 2: disadvantageges > advantages
- Body 1: lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantageges > advantages, bám sát vào gợi ý ở context đề bài cho để triển khai:
- Main idea: small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores (big shops sited on the outskirts may drive small ones to the brink of closure)
- Supporting idea: (chỗ này có thể lồng ghép vào 1/2 câu về advantages ví dụ như mặc dù large outt-off-town stores có không gian & nhiều hàng hoá hơn, tuy nhiên...) >> Traditional and small-scale businesses are unable to compete against big transnational corporations. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "complete" tiếng anh
- Example: In the quaint town of Maplewood, local shops that have been staples of the community for generations are facing the threat of closure. The rise of sprawling out-of-town megastores, offering a wide array of products at competitive prices, has led residents to opt for the convenience of a single shopping destination over the charm of individual small-town shops.
- Body 2: lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantageges > advantages, bám sát vào gợi ý ở context đề bài cho để triển khai:
- Main idea gây ra sự bất tiện cho người dân (cause inconvenience / Puts local people to great inconvenience)
- Supporting idea 1: People without cars have limited access to out-of town stores (Increasing bankruptcies among small town-center shops are an unfortunate situation that puts local people to great inconvenience, with those who are not in possession of a car standing most affected because they now have to travel to a distant place to shop) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Từ vựng Topic Car IELTS
- Supporting idea 2: It may result in an increase in the use of cars >> congestion & environmental problems (Cause traffic congestion and Heighten pollution levels) (Traffic congestion will become worse due to the higher number of vehicles on streets. To make the matter worse, the quantity of pollutants emitted from car engines will rise, which heightens pollution levels in those places)
- Example: Imagine a small town where the only bakery closes down. Residents who don't have cars now need to travel to a supermarket in a neighboring town for their bread and pastries. This scenario highlights how the closure of a single shop can have multiple negative consequences for residents, including limited access to necessities, potential social isolation, and increased environmental concerns.
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