Phân tích đề"In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?" IELTS WRITING (Đề thi 17/9/2022 & 3/3/2024)

Bên cạnh HƯỚNG DẪN TỪNG BƯỚC CÁCH LÀM BÀI TẬP MẪU IELTS READING DẠNG FILL IN THE GAP, IELTS TUTOR cung cấp Phân tích đề"In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores" IELTS WRITING

In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Đối với dạng outweigh  cách dễ nhất nên theo hướng TOTALLY 1 phía, bên  cạnh  đó  bài  này  đề  bài  hơi  dài  dòng  cần  phân  tích  kĩ  để  tìm  ra đề  đang yêu cầu gìì
• Đề  bài  ghi  "In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars" như  vậy:
  • Đề  bài  yêu  cầu  liệu  mặt lợi của việc "people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores" là  lớn  hơn  mặt  hại  không? 
  • Những  câu  còn  lại  "In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business" & "As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars" đều  là  các  câu  context  của  đề  bài    >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "result" tiếng anh
• Đề bài này nếu theo hướng disadvantageges > advantages  thì  sẽ  bố  cục  bài  như  sau  (IELTS TUTOR giải thích: nên  chọn  theo  hướng  này  vì  đề  đã  có  sẵn  2 main  idea  để  gợi  ý)
  • Intro câu 2: disadvantageges > advantages
  • Body  1: lí  do  thứ  1 vì  sao  disadvantageges > advantages, bám  sát  vào  gợi  ý  ở  context  đề  bài cho để triển  khai: 
    • Main  idea: small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores (big shops sited on the outskirts may drive small ones to the brink of closure)
    • Supporting  idea: (chỗ  này  có  thể  lồng  ghép  vào  1/2 câu  về  advantages  ví  dụ  như  mặc  dù  large  outt-off-town  stores có  không  gian  & nhiều  hàng  hoá  hơn, tuy  nhiên...) >> Traditional and  small-scale businesses are unable to compete against big transnational corporations.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "complete" tiếng anh
    • Example: In the quaint town of Maplewood, local shops that have been staples of the community for generations are facing the threat of closure. The rise of sprawling out-of-town megastores, offering a wide array of products at competitive prices, has led residents to opt for the convenience of a single shopping destination over the charm of individual small-town shops.
  • Body  2:  lí  do  thứ  1 vì  sao  disadvantageges > advantages, bám  sát  vào  gợi  ý  ở  context  đề  bài cho để triển  khai: 
    • Main  idea  gây  ra  sự  bất  tiện  cho  người  dân  (cause  inconvenience / Puts local people to great inconvenience)
    • Supporting  idea  1: People without cars have limited access to out-of town stores (Increasing bankruptcies among small town-center shops are an unfortunate situation that puts local people to great inconvenience, with those who are not in possession of a car standing most affected because they now have to travel to a distant place to shop)   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng Topic Car IELTS
    • Supporting  idea  2: It may result in an increase in the use of cars >> congestion  & environmental  problems  (Cause traffic congestion and Heighten pollution levels) (Traffic congestion will become worse due to the higher number of vehicles on streets. To  make the  matter worse, the quantity of pollutants emitted from car engines will rise, which heightens pollution levels in those places) 
    • Example: Imagine a small town where the only bakery closes down. Residents who don't have cars now need to travel to a supermarket in a neighboring town for their bread and pastries. This scenario highlights how the closure of a single shop can have multiple negative consequences for residents, including limited access to necessities, potential social isolation, and increased environmental concerns.

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