Phân tích "In some countries, people are having children at later age in life. /Nowadays, many people decide to have their first child in their later life. What are the reasons? Do the advantage outweigh disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 16/9/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In some countries, people are having children at later age in life. What are the reasons? Do the advantage outweigh disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 16/9/2022)

In some countries, people are having children at later age in life. What are the reasons? Do the advantage outweigh disadvantages?

hoặc:

Nowadays, many people decide to have their first child in their later life. What are the reasons? Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? (Đề thi 24/6/2023)

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi "What are the reasons"
  • Main idea 1: The fact that pregnancy has been more common in older women stems from late marriage 
    • Supporting idea: Late marriage would help singles have more time to seek a stable job and broaden behavioral experience before deciding to live with someone forever   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase từ "HELP" trong tiếng anh
    • Example: 
      • In the United States, the median age of first marriage for women has been steadily increasing in recent decades. In 1970, the median age of first marriage for women was 20.8 years. By 2020, the median age of first marriage for women had increased to 27.9 years. This increase in the age of first marriage means that women are now more likely to be older when they become pregnant. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ"conceive" tiếng anh
      • In Japan, the median age of first marriage for women is even higher than in the United States. In 2020, the median age of first marriage for women in Japan was 30.4 years. This means that many Japanese women are now in their 30s or even 40s when they become pregnant.
  • Main idea 2: It is widely believed that children are raised better by older parents
    • Supporting idea: TYING THE KNOT EARLY, in some cases, would cause constant quarrels about rights of child-rearing between young couples due to their immature thoughts on marital values ><  DELAYED MARRIAGE may secure better conditions for children’s future  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: older fathers and mothers are generally wealthier, more experienced, and more willing to take the responsibility of bringing up a child)   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase từ "lead to" tiếng anh
    • Example: 
      • A study by the University of California, Berkeley found that children born to older mothers were more likely to have higher IQs and to be less likely to be diagnosed with autism or other developmental disorders.
      • A study by the University of Pennsylvania found that children raised by older parents were more likely to graduate from college and to have higher-paying jobs.
      • A study by the University of Toronto found that children raised by older parents were more likely to have strong social and emotional skills.
• Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 (disadvantages > advantages)
  • Main idea 1: (Nên viết về family life): having children later will cause a significant age gap between the two generations.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase "find out / discover/learn" IELTS
    • Supporting idea: This makes it harder for parents to understand and communicate with their offspring
    • Example: ​A couple who has their first child at age 40 will be 60 when their child graduates from college. 
  • Main idea 2: (Nên viết về society) Having children when reaching over 35 can affect pregnancy due to aging health >> This might adversely affect the quality of the future workforce if too many people decide to follow this trend
    • Supporting idea:  Babies are not healthy enough or even die premature death because mothers' health will decline (HOẶC: when an aged couple decides to give birth, there are serious health risks for the woman in the prenatal and postnatal period)   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic Family (child education, child birth...) IELTS
    • Example: 

      • A study published in the journal "Human Reproduction" found that the risk of miscarriage increases with maternal age. The study found that the risk of miscarriage for women over the age of 35 was 20%, compared to 10% for women under the age of 35.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

      • Another study, published in the journal "Nature Medicine," found that the risk of chromosomal abnormalities increases with maternal age. The study found that the risk of Down syndrome for women over the age of 35 was 1 in 350, compared to 1 in 1,250 for women under the age of 35.

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