Phân tích"In some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age. Is this a positive or negative development?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"In some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age. Is this a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

In some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age. Is this a positive or negative development?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng positive -  the introduction of laws to prevent ageism is a positive development):
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao positive 
    • Main idea: age should not be a determining factor when hiring an employee (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: this helps companies find the right person for a job)
    • Supporting idea: 
      • If age were essential criterion, companies would most likely end up selecting candidates with less experience and hence deprive businesses of what would be a valuable addition to the team.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Companies need people to run operations profitably. If they discriminate against applicants on the basis of age, they may lose a prospective employee who could have performed well) >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Word form của từ "perform"
    • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao positive 
    • Main idea: In absence of a law protecting the right to apply for a job without any age-based discrimination, people will not get equal opportunities
    • Supporting idea: A person has a right to learn anything at any age and then compete for a job >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng và paraphrase từ "then" tiếng anh 
    • Example: For example, a housewife may decide to learn advanced computer languages after 40 years of age and then apply for a job in a software company >> Rejecting her application merely on the basis of age instead of her competence and qualification will not be a morally correct decision. 

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