Phân tích"In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development. This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the countryside. This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole. What are these problems? How might they be reduced?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development. This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the countryside. This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole. What are these problems? How might they be reduced?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development. This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the countryside. This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole. What are these problems? How might they be reduced?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: One of the primary issues arising from this urban-rural divide is the exacerbation of income inequality. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Rapid economic growth in urban centers often results in higher-paying job opportunities and better infrastructure, attracting a significant portion of the workforce. 
        • Consequently, rural areas are left with limited economic prospects, leading to lower income levels and reduced access to essential services. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
        • This widening income gap can lead to social tensions, as disparities in wealth and opportunities become more pronounced.
      • Example: India's rapid economic growth, centered in megacities like Mumbai and Bangalore, has led to a pronounced income gap, with the wealthiest 1% controlling over 40% of the national wealth, while rural areas contend with limited agricultural income, lack of industry diversification, and inadequate infrastructure, contributing to poverty and unemployment.
    • Main idea 2: Another significant challenge is the strain on urban infrastructure and services due to migration from rural areas. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • As individuals flock to urban centers in search of better economic prospects, the demand for housing, transportation, healthcare, and education surges. 
        • This influx can overwhelm existing infrastructure, leading to issues such as congestion, inadequate housing, and strain on public services.
      • Example: Brazil's vibrant coastal city grapples with chronic traffic congestion exacerbated by limited public transportation infrastructure, leading to long commutes, reduced productivity, and frustrated citizens, highlighting the need for expanding public transportation and promoting alternative modes of travel.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: Governments should invest in infrastructure and promote economic opportunities in rural areas, ensuring that the benefits of growth are more evenly distributed. 
      • Supporting idea: This might involve incentivizing industries to establish operations in rural regions, improving rural education and healthcare facilities, and fostering agricultural innovation.
      • Example: China's "Western Development Strategy," initiated in 1999, seeks to narrow the economic disparity between the prosperous eastern coast and less developed western regions through investments in infrastructure, technology transfer, industrial development, and supportive policies, resulting in notable improvements in rural infrastructure, living standards, and economic opportunities in western China.
    • Main idea 2: Additionally, measures to promote sustainable urbanization, such as the development of satellite cities and the improvement of public transportation, can help alleviate the strain on urban centers.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • By creating satellite cities and improving public transportation, urban congestion can be significantly reduced. 
        • This helps to ease traffic flow, enhance mobility, and reduce the overall burden on existing urban infrastructure.
      • Example: South Korea's development of satellite cities like Songdo and Pangyo around Seoul has successfully decentralized population and economic activity, alleviating congestion in the capital, offering alternative living and working options, and ultimately enhancing the overall quality of life while fostering balanced regional development.

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