Phân tích"In many countries today, major cities have become too big and overcrowded.Why is this?What measures could be taken to reduce this problem?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (đề thi 20/11/2023 computer-based)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"In many countries today, major cities have become too big and overcrowded.Why is this?What measures could be taken to reduce this problem?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (đề thi 20/11/2023 computer-based)

In many countries today, major cities have become too big and overcrowded.Why is this?What measures could be taken to reduce this problem?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: Many people move from rural areas to urban centers in search of better economic opportunities, education, and improved living standards. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Supporting idea: This migration contributes significantly to the population growth of major cities.
      • Example: Cities like Shanghai, Beijing, and Shenzhen have experienced explosive growth in recent decades due to rapid economic development and urbanization.
    • Main idea 2: Urban areas often concentrate job opportunities in various sectors, attracting people seeking employment. 
      • Supporting idea: The prospect of better career options and higher wages motivates individuals to move to cities.
      • Example: This region in California is a global hub for technology and innovation, attracting talent from around the world with its abundance of high-paying jobs in software development, engineering, and other tech-related fields. The promise of career advancement and financial success motivates many skilled individuals to migrate to Silicon Valley, contributing to its continued growth and dynamism.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: Encouraging development in smaller towns and rural areas can help distribute economic opportunities more evenly. 
      • Supporting idea: This can be achieved through targeted investment in infrastructure, education, and healthcare outside major cities.
      • Example: Launched in 1999, this initiative aims to invest billions of dollars in infrastructure, education, and technology in China's less developed western regions. This includes building roads, railways, and communication networks, establishing universities and vocational training centers, and attracting businesses to invest in these areas. The goal is to create new jobs, improve living standards, and reduce the pressure on major cities like Beijing and Shanghai.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
    • Main idea 2: The advancement of technology has made remote work more feasible. 
      • Supporting idea: Encouraging telecommuting and flexible work arrangements can reduce the need for individuals to live in congested urban areas, alleviating population pressure.
      • Example:  Platforms like Uber, Upwork, and Fiverr have created millions of flexible work opportunities in various sectors, allowing individuals to work remotely and choose their own schedules. This shift away from traditional 9-to-5 office jobs has made location independence more attainable for many workers.

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