Phân tích"In many countries, people like to eat a wider variety of food from other region more than local food. As a result, much of the food has to come from other regions. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages? "IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"In many countries, people like to eat a wider variety of food from other region more than local food. As a result, much of the food has to come from other regions. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages? "IELTS WRITING TASK 2

In many countries, people like to eat a wider variety of food from other region more than local food. As a result, much of the food has to come from other regions. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages > advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages > advantages
      • Main idea: The transportation of food around the world greatly contributes to global warming due to the large amount of carbon emissions produced during the process. >> IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp Ideas & Từ vựng topic "global warming" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: Eating locally grown produce will help to reduce the distance that food travels, helping to reduce the negative effects of carbon emissions which are released from vehicles during transport.
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    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: It not only leads to increase in price of the food but also reduces its nutritional value. >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Word form của "nutrition"
        • Supporting idea: Foods travel from local farmers to ultimate consumers and have to go through various stages to be sold in national or international markets. These stages may involve bulk-buying, processing, storing and packaging and so on >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý PARAPHRASE "AND SO ON" (Diễn đạt "vân vân..."tiếng anh)
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  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý ĐỂ ĐẠT IELTS 7.0 WRITING, SPEAKING NÊN HỌC TỪ VỰNG ĐAO TO BÚA LỚN?
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures) >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "consequence" tiếng anh
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages
      • Main idea 1: if non-locally grown foods are purchased less often on the market, local people will therefore have fewer opportunities to experience specialties and healthy products from other regions.
        • Supporting idea: Without access to exotic foods from far away, consumers are restrained to local produce which is often seasonal. Given better living standards, many families can afford the extra costs of shipping and food preservation to try non-locally grown foods, which diversifies their diet and satisfies their appetite. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "appetite" tiếng anh
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      • Main idea 2: if local foods dominate the market, customers will fall victim to price inflation since local merchants would take advantage of this opportunity to increase prices.
        • Supporting idea:
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    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages
      • Main idea 1: The transportation of food around the world greatly contributes to global warming due to the large amount of carbon emissions produced during the process. >> IELTS TUTOR Giải thích: Contribute to sth
        • Supporting idea: Eating locally grown produce will help to reduce the distance that food travels, helping to reduce the negative effects of carbon emissions which are released from vehicles during transport.
        • Example:
      • Main idea 2: It not only leads to increase in price of the food but also reduces its nutritional value.
        • Supporting idea: Foods travel from local farmers to ultimate consumers and have to go through various stages to be sold in national or international markets. These stages may involve bulk-buying, processing, storing and packaging and so on >> IELTS TUTOR Giải thích phrasal verb: go through
        • Example:

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