Phân tích "In many countries nowadays, more and more women have full-time jobs as men, so there is logic that men and women should share the housework tasks equally (like cleaning and looking after children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In many countries nowadays, more and more women have full-time jobs as men, so there is logic that men and women should share the housework tasks equally (like cleaning and looking after children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

In many countries nowadays, more and more women have full-time jobs as men, so there is logic that men and women should share the housework tasks equally (like cleaning and looking after children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: when married couples are regular employees, sharing household duties reduces the burden of housework on one person. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "reduce" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea:
        • This is because home chores can be completed in less time when two people are performing their duties. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH PARAPHRASE "BECAUSE" TIẾNG ANH
        • As a result, they can calmly complete their household work and can reach the workplace on time. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "as a result (of)" tiếng anh 
      • Example: For example, a recent study by Cambridge University found that families in which both partners are working full-time and sharing housework had less chaos in the morning and reached at work on time. However, opponents say that performing home duties is the responsibility of women >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "however" tiếng anh 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: the families in which both husband and wife are working have lesser conflict when they both help each other doing household work.
      • Supporting idea:
        • When both husband and wife contribute to household work, no one raises complaints that one is doing more work as compared to another. 
        • This leads to having a happy family and a prosperous life.
      • Example: 

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