Phân tích "In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:

In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

You should write at least 250 words.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people regard this as completely wrong
    • Main idea 1: Most of the workplace is lack of sufficient support for children. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Without adequate support, a child’s misunderstanding or improper communicating with adults would only frustrate him and prevent him active learning and interacting with other people.
        • Working in office conditions for long hours or being exploited by the employers physically and mentally can cause various kinds of health issues which may lead to a bleak future.
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Enjoying the work that they do may make them pay more attention to it and focus less on their studies. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "focus" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: This may result in doing menial jobs in the future as they will lack the minimum educational qualification.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Children can get useful job experiences from the work ambiance
      • Supporting idea:  They prepare their youth to search for paid jobs and fulfill certain duties because they gain experience and skills that come in handy in their professional life. 
      • Example: For example, when a person is asked to tend to children younger than them or elderly people in return for cash, they learn to take care of others, cooperate with people, and maintain goodwill. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "cooperate" tiếng anh 
    • Main idea 2: Working for money helps to ease the burden of the elders in a family. 
      • Supporting idea: Children are able to save money for their future needs and help their parents financially. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "help"tiếng anh 
      • Example: 

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