Phân tích"In many cities, young people prefer shopping as a form of leisure activity. Why do you think this happens? Is it a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi computer-based 3.12.2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In many cities, young people prefer shopping as a form of leisure activity. Why do you think this happens? Is it a positive or negative development?​​" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi computer-based 3.12.2022)

In many cities, young people prefer shopping as a form of leisure activity. Why do you think this happens? Is it a positive or negative development?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: Shopping can help release stress >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "release" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Whether online shoppers adding items to their shopping cart online or visiting their favorite boutique for a few hours, they do get a psychological and emotional boost.
        • Even window shopping or online browsing can bring brain-fueled happiness.
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: By providing fancy places and entertainment factors with their products, department stores have tried to make themselves a play zone for the young. 
      • Supporting idea: Nowadays there is not enough space for young people to have fun, so they have naturally got together to shopping centers to enjoy their time.
      • Example: Many big shopping centers or department stores such as…. have their unique leisure communities. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "department" tiếng anh 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 - Negative 
    • Main idea 1:  It may cause addiction
      • Supporting idea: 
        • This is because they essentially get addicted to how their brain feels while shopping. 
        • As they shop, their brain releases endorphins and dopamine, and over time, these feelings become addictive.
        • Many shopping addicts face financial problems, and they may become overwhelmed with debt. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Word form của "overwhelm"
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: It is a waste of time and money >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "waste" 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Youngsters spend their hard-earned money on unimportant things.
        • The time which could be spent in a more productive way is spent on buying things which are not needed. Instead, they can join gymnastics or aerobics to have a healthy mind and body.
      • Example: 

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