Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "If a product is good, or it meets people's needs, people will buy it. So advertising is unnecessary and no more than entertainment. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.
I. Đề bài
If a product is good, or it meets people's needs, people will buy it. So advertising is unnecessary and no more than entertainment. Do you agree or disagree?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
- Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY
- Main idea: On an individual level, advertisements / COMMERCIALS / PIECES OF ADVERTISEMENTS / ADVERTS benefits BENEFIT consumers a lot, especially given that buyers can turn to advertising as a useful source of information.
- Supporting idea: In fact, some advertisements might disclose detailed information about products like health hazards of overeating some types of food, enabling consumers to make more judicious buying decisions. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "hazard" tiếng anh
- Example:
- Main idea: On an individual level, advertisements / COMMERCIALS / PIECES OF ADVERTISEMENTS / ADVERTS benefits BENEFIT consumers a lot, especially given that buyers can turn to advertising as a useful source of information.
- Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY
- Main idea: From an economic perspective, advertising promotes consumerism, meaning that thanks to eye-catching advertisements, consumers tend to buy more products.
- Supporting idea: This, in turn, gives a boost to the whole economy as a whole.
- Example:
- Main idea: From an economic perspective, advertising promotes consumerism, meaning that thanks to eye-catching advertisements, consumers tend to buy more products.
- Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
Some people argue that if a product is of high quality or meets consumer demand, advertising becomes redundant and serves merely as entertainment. I totally disagree with this notion, as advertising provides essential information to buyers and plays a pivotal role in stimulating economic growth.
On an individual level (cấp độ cá nhân – personal scale), advertisements offer invaluable insight (thông tin vô giá – extremely useful information), particularly for consumers trying to make well-informed purchasing decisions (quyết định mua hàng có cơ sở – choices based on adequate knowledge). In many cases, a thoughtfully-crafted commercial (quảng cáo được thiết kế kỹ lưỡng – carefully designed advertisement) presents details such as the nutritional value (giá trị dinh dưỡng – the health benefits of food) or potential side effects of a product. For example, advertisements for dietary supplements often highlight both benefits and health-related risks (rủi ro liên quan đến sức khoẻ – dangers that affect one's health), helping customers steer clear of (tránh khỏi – avoid) unsuitable options. Thus, rather than being mere entertainment, advertising acts as a practical decision-making tool (công cụ hỗ trợ ra quyết định – useful resource for choosing wisely).>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
From an economic perspective (về mặt kinh tế – related to the economy), advertising is indispensable in driving consumerism (thúc đẩy chủ nghĩa tiêu dùng – encouraging people to buy more), which is essential for a healthy economy. By introducing attention-grabbing content (nội dung thu hút sự chú ý – content that catches the eye), advertisements influence public interest and generate demand for both long-established brands (thương hiệu lâu đời – brands that have existed for a long time) and new market entrants (người chơi mới trên thị trường – newly introduced businesses). This, in turn, boosts sales, supports business growth, and increases employment opportunities, ultimately giving a strong push to the national economy (thúc đẩy nền kinh tế quốc gia – energizing the economic system of a country).
In conclusion, advertising is far more than entertainment, as it delivers consumer guidance and significantly contributes to economic development.
💡 New Vocabulary with Definitions
invaluable insight – thông tin vô giá – extremely useful knowledge
well-informed purchasing decisions – quyết định mua hàng có cơ sở – choices made based on sufficient understanding
thoughtfully-crafted commercial – quảng cáo được thiết kế kỹ lưỡng – a well-designed advertisement
nutritional value – giá trị dinh dưỡng – the health benefits found in food or supplements
health-related risks – rủi ro liên quan đến sức khoẻ – potential dangers to one's health
steer clear of – tránh khỏi – avoid
practical decision-making tool – công cụ hỗ trợ ra quyết định – useful resource for making choices
economic perspective – về mặt kinh tế – viewpoint concerning the economy
driving consumerism – thúc đẩy chủ nghĩa tiêu dùng – encouraging more buying activity
attention-grabbing content – nội dung thu hút sự chú ý – material designed to catch people's attention
long-established brands – thương hiệu lâu đời – brands that have been around for a long time
new market entrants – người chơi mới trên thị trường – new businesses in the market
strong push to the national economy – thúc đẩy nền kinh tế quốc gia – enhance a country's financial system
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ
"Advertisements offer invaluable insight..."
"Helping customers steer clear of unsuitable options..."
"Giving a strong push to the national economy..."
🔁 Synonyms & Antonyms
| Vocabulary | Synonyms (3) | Antonyms (3) |
|---|---|---|
| invaluable insight | vital knowledge, critical information, essential data | irrelevant detail, trivial knowledge, useless information |
| steer clear of | avoid, evade, dodge | embrace, face, confront |
| driving consumerism | boosting spending, promoting consumption, increasing demand | reducing spending, curbing consumption, discouraging buying |
✨ Complex Grammar Structures Used
Inversion for emphasis
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ "Not only does advertising offer information, but it also stimulates the economy."
👉 Không những quảng cáo cung cấp thông tin, mà nó còn kích thích nền kinh tế.
Relative clause with non-defining purpose
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ"...advertisements for dietary supplements often highlight both benefits and health-related risks, which helps customers steer clear of unsuitable options."
👉 ...quảng cáo thực phẩm chức năng thường nêu bật cả lợi ích và rủi ro sức khỏe, điều này giúp người tiêu dùng tránh những lựa chọn không phù hợp.
Conditional clause
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ"If advertising were purely entertainment, it would not influence purchasing behaviour."
👉 Nếu quảng cáo chỉ đơn thuần là giải trí, nó sẽ không ảnh hưởng đến hành vi mua sắm.
Các khóa học IELTS online 1 kèm 1 - 100% cam kết đạt target 6.0 - 7.0 - 8.0 - Đảm bảo đầu ra - Thi không đạt, học lại FREE
>> Thành tích học sinh IELTS TUTOR với hàng ngàn feedback được cập nhật hàng ngày
