Phân tích"Some people believe that if a police officer carries guns, it can encourage a higher level of violence. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

Bên cạnh Bài sửa đề thi IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ngày 22/8/2020 của HS đi thi đạt 7.0 writing, IELTS TUTOR Hướng dẫn Phân tích"Some people believe that if a police officer carries guns, it can encourage a higher level of violence. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

Some people believe that if a police officer carries guns, it can encourage a higher level of violence. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý một vài ideas từ thầy Simon như sau:

• Many criminals use weapons
• The threat of a gun can deter criminals
• Police officers can forces a criminal to surrender
• It is easier to arrest someone and avoid physical violence
• The police may shoot violent criminals in self defence
• They can protect the public
• They can shoot an escaping criminal who poses a serious danger to the public

• There is a risk of accidents and mistakes
• The police might shoot an unarmed criminal or an innocent person
• Accidents can happen in public places
• There are several alternatives to guns (e.g tear gas, sprays and electric shock weapons)
• Only special police units should use guns

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Bài này thuộc dạng opinion essay, giả sử nếu TOTALLY DISAGREE với quan điểm đề cho "if a police officer carries guns, it can encourage a higher level of violence" bố cục như sau:
  • Intro câu 2: TOTALLY DISAGREE với quan điểm đề cho "if a police officer carries guns, it can encourage a higher level of violence"
  • Body 1: nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE với quan điểm đề cho "if a police officer carries guns, it can encourage a higher level of violence"
    • Có thể triển khai main idea: police cần có súng để khống chế tội phạm nguy hiểm việc này vừa bảo vệ tính mạng của họ vừa bảo vệ an ninh trật tự 
      • Main idea: Armed police can respond quickly to potential armed threats, increasing the likelihood of neutralizing dangerous situations promptly.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Armed police officers are equipped to defend themselves and others in high-risk situations. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
          • When encountering armed criminals, having access to firearms can provide officers with a means to protect themselves and prevent harm.
        • Example: In 2017, a man armed with a rifle opened fire in a crowded shopping mall in El Paso, Texas. The gunman killed 22 people and injured 24 others. The shooting lasted for about 10 minutes, and it ended when an armed police officer shot and killed the gunman.
  • Body 2:  nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE với quan điểm đề cho "if a police officer carries guns, it can encourage a higher level of violence"
    • Có thể triển khai main idea: police cần có súng để mang tính chất răn đe tội phạm (tội phạm thấy súng sợ)
      • Main idea: The presence of armed police may act as a deterrent to potential criminals, reducing the incidence of armed crimes.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Potential criminals may be less inclined to engage in armed crimes if they believe there is a higher chance of encountering armed police during their illegal activities. 
          • The risk of facing lethal force from law enforcement can dissuade individuals from attempting armed crimes.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
        • Example:  A study by the University of Chicago found that the presence of armed police in high-crime areas led to a decrease in gun violence.

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