Phân tích đề"More and more people no longer read the newspaper or watch TV programs to get news. They get news about the world through the internet. Is this a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS paper-based 1/4/2023)

Bên cạnh Bài sửa đề thi IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ngày 22/8/2020 của HS đi thi đạt 7.0 writing, IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề"More and more people no longer read the newspaper or watch TV programs to get news. They get news about the world through the internet. Is this a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS paper-based 1/4/2023)

More and more people no longer read the newspaper or watch TV programs to get news. They get news about the world through the internet. Is this a positive or negative development?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng này thì cũng được xem như dạng opinion essay hỏi quan điểm, vậy cách dễ nhất là sẽ theo hướng TOTALLY, bài này có thể theo hướng POSITIVE > NEGATIVE bố cục chia như sau:
  • Intro câu 2: Trend đề nói "More and more people no longer read the newspaper or watch TV programs to get news. They get news about the world through the internet" positive > negative 
  • Body 1: Lí do thứ nhất vì sao positive > negative 
    • Ở đây có thể triển khai là cập nhật tin tức qua internet nhanh chóng hơn nhiều so với newspaper hoặc Tv (lấy ví dụ như covid, tin tức từng phút, báo hay TV không sánh bằng)
    • • Main idea: The internet allows for immediate sharing of breaking news, providing people with the latest information as events unfold.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Paraphrase từ"urgent"tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • With just a few clicks, people can obtain up-to-date news and analysis on a variety of topics, including politics, sports, and business.
      • Example: 
        • For instance, news outlets and health organizations were able to quickly share updates on the number of cases, deaths, and hospitalizations related to COVID-19. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
        • Users on social media platforms, such as Twitter and Facebook could quickly share updates and information with their followers, leading to a widespread dissemination of information. This helped to raise awareness about the virus and its impact, and also allowed for the sharing of advice and support among individuals and communities.
  • Body 2: Lí do thứ nhất vì sao positive > negative 
    • Main idea: The internet enables people to access news on their own schedules, which can be convenient for those with busy lifestyles.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the internet provides a convenient way for people to access news on their own schedules, without having to rely on traditional media outlets that operate on fixed schedules)
    • Supporting idea: This is because the internet provides a 24/7 news cycle, allowing people to access news on their own schedules>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
    • Example: 
      • Many people turn to social media platforms, such as Twitter and Facebook, for news updates because social media allows people to follow news outlets and journalists, and receive updates on the latest news stories as they happen
      • People can listen to these podcasts on their own schedules, whether during their commute or while doing other tasks.
  • Conclusion: paraphrase câu 2 intro

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