Phân tích "Health experts believe that walking is a good exercise for health. However, people are walking less nowadays. Why is this happening how can people be encourage to walk more?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Health experts believe that walking is a good exercise for health. However, people are walking less nowadays. Why is this happening how can people be encourage to walk more?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Health experts believe that walking is a good exercise for health. However, people are walking less nowadays. Why is this happening how can people be encourage to walk more?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1: There could be several reasons why people are walking less nowadays
    • Main idea 1: One possible reason is the increase in sedentary lifestyles due to the rise of technology and the availability of entertainment options that involve minimal physical activity. 
      • Supporting idea: Today’s people may spend more time sitting and watching TV or playing video games rather than going for a walk or engaging in physical activities.
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    • Main idea 2: Another reason could be the lack of walkable infrastructure, such as sidewalks and safe pedestrian crossings, in many urban areas. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng tính từ"urban"tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • This can discourage people from walking as they may not feel safe or comfortable navigating through traffic or uneven terrain. 
        • The lack of green spaces or parks in some areas may make it less appealing for people to walk for leisure or exercise.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2: To encourage people to walk more, there are several steps that can be taken. 
    • Main idea 1:  One approach is to raise awareness about the health benefits of walking and the negative effects of a sedentary lifestyle. 
      • Supporting idea: This can be done through educational campaigns, social media, and public service announcements. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Paraphrase từ "Social media" (Diễn tả "mạng xã hội" tiếng anh)
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    • Main idea 2: Another approach is to improve walkability in urban areas by creating more pedestrian-friendly infrastructure, such as wider sidewalks, crosswalks, and pedestrian-only zones. 
      • Supporting idea: This can also include the development of more parks and green spaces, which can encourage people to walk more. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "development" 
      • Example: 

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