Phân tích "Some people think that hard working and determination are the key factors for being successful in the life, other people feel that other factors are important. Discuss both sides, what is your opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Some people think that hard working and determination are the key factors for being successful in the life, other people feel that other factors are important. Discuss both sides, what is your opinion?

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Success in life depends  on other factors like money and personal appearance
    • Main idea 1: Money can provide individuals with access to education, networking opportunities, and other resources that can help them achieve their goals >> IELTS TUTOR Phân biệt "access" dùng như danh từ & động từ
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Education often comes with a price tag, whether it's tuition fees for formal education or the cost of training and skill development. 
        • Money can enable individuals to pursue higher education, attend workshops, or enroll in courses that enhance their knowledge and skills, opening doors to better job opportunities or entrepreneurial ventures.
    • Main idea 2: Personal appearance may play a role in certain industries, such as fashion or entertainment, where physical appearance is often prioritized.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Supporting idea:
        • In industries like fashion and entertainment, where image and aesthetics are central, first impressions matter greatly. 
        • A person's appearance is often the first thing others notice, and it can influence initial judgments and perceptions.
      • Example: 
        • Kendall Jenner, a renowned fashion model and reality TV personality, has become one of the world's most successful models, amassing millions from her career, celebrated for her striking figure, stunning features, and impeccable fashion sense.
        • Another example is Tom Cruise, an actor and producer. He is one of the most popular and successful actors in Hollywood, and he has starred in many blockbuster films, such as Top Gun, Mission: Impossible, and Jerry Maguire. Cruise is known for his good looks, his charming personality, and his ability to perform action stunts.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Success in life depends on hard work and determination & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Individuals who are willing to put in the effort and persist through challenges are more likely to achieve their goals, regardless of their background or financial situation. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Supporting idea:
        • Persistence is a key component of resilience, the ability to bounce back from setbacks and adapt to adversity. 
        • Resilient individuals are better equipped to navigate obstacles and continue working towards their goals.
      • Example: J.K. Rowling was a single mother living on welfare when she wrote the first Harry Potter book. She was rejected by 12 different publishers before Bloomsbury agreed to publish the book. The Harry Potter series went on to become one of the most successful book series of all time.
    • Main idea 2: Hard work and determination also help individuals develop important skills like perseverance, resilience, and problem-solving, which can be useful in many areas of life.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Persistence often involves finding solutions to problems and overcoming obstacles. 
        • This problem-solving skill can be applied in various contexts, from personal life challenges to complex work-related issues.

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