🔥Phân tích "Some people think that hard working and determination are the key factors for being successful in the life, other people feel that other factors are important. Discuss both sides, what is your opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Bài mẫu, kèm dịch & giải thích từ vựng & cấu trúc grammar khó (Thi ngày 24/3/2025)

Bên cạnh Phân tích +kèm sửa bài"The table below shows the number of visitors in the UK and their average spending from 2003 to 2008" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that hard working and determination are the key factors for being successful in the life, other people feel that other factors are important. Discuss both sides, what is your opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people think that hard working and determination are the key factors for being successful in the life, other people feel that other factors are important. Discuss both sides, what is your opinion?

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Success in life depends  on other factors like money and personal appearance
    • Main idea 1: Money can provide individuals with access to education, networking opportunities, and other resources that can help them achieve their goals >> IELTS TUTOR Phân biệt "access" dùng như danh từ & động từ
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Education often comes with a price tag, whether it's tuition fees for formal education or the cost of training and skill development. 
        • Money can enable individuals to pursue higher education, attend workshops, or enroll in courses that enhance their knowledge and skills, opening doors to better job opportunities or entrepreneurial ventures.
    • Main idea 2: Personal appearance may play a role in certain industries, such as fashion or entertainment, where physical appearance is often prioritized.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Supporting idea:
        • In industries like fashion and entertainment, where image and aesthetics are central, first impressions matter greatly. 
        • A person's appearance is often the first thing others notice, and it can influence initial judgments and perceptions.
      • Example: 
        • Kendall Jenner, a renowned fashion model and reality TV personality, has become one of the world's most successful models, amassing millions from her career, celebrated for her striking figure, stunning features, and impeccable fashion sense.
        • Another example is Tom Cruise, an actor and producer. He is one of the most popular and successful actors in Hollywood, and he has starred in many blockbuster films, such as Top Gun, Mission: Impossible, and Jerry Maguire. Cruise is known for his good looks, his charming personality, and his ability to perform action stunts.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Success in life depends on hard work and determination & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Individuals who are willing to put in the effort and persist through challenges are more likely to achieve their goals, regardless of their background or financial situation. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Supporting idea:
        • Persistence is a key component of resilience, the ability to bounce back from setbacks and adapt to adversity. 
        • Resilient individuals are better equipped to navigate obstacles and continue working towards their goals.
      • Example: J.K. Rowling was a single mother living on welfare when she wrote the first Harry Potter book. She was rejected by 12 different publishers before Bloomsbury agreed to publish the book. The Harry Potter series went on to become one of the most successful book series of all time.
    • Main idea 2: Hard work and determination also help individuals develop important skills like perseverance, resilience, and problem-solving, which can be useful in many areas of life.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Persistence often involves finding solutions to problems and overcoming obstacles. 
        • This problem-solving skill can be applied in various contexts, from personal life challenges to complex work-related issues.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

**Some individuals believe that hard work and determination are the cornerstones (nền tảng cốt lổi - the most important part of something) of success, whereas others argue that factors such as wealth and physical appearance play a more pivotal role. While both perspectives have merit, I firmly believe that perseverance and effort are the most decisive factors in achieving success.

On the one hand, financial resources and personal appearance can contribute significantly to one’s success. Affluent individuals (người giàu có - wealthy people) have the means to access high-quality education, professional networks, and business opportunities. Education, in particular, often comes with a hefty price tag (giá cả cao - expensive cost), as it includes tuition fees, specialized training, and professional development programs. Furthermore, in industries such as fashion and entertainment, aesthetic appeal (sự hút mắt về ngoại hình - attractiveness) can be a determining factor in one's career trajectory. For instance, Kendall Jenner, a renowned fashion model, has leveraged her striking appearance to build a lucrative career, while Tom Cruise, known for his chiseled features (gương mặt điển trai rõ nét - well-defined facial structure), has enjoyed immense success in Hollywood.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

On the other hand, unwavering perseverance (sự kiên trì không lay chuyển - relentless persistence) and hard work are the fundamental drivers of long-term success. Individuals who persevere through adversities (vượt qua nghị cảnh - overcome difficulties) are more likely to achieve their goals regardless of their background. For example, J.K. Rowling faced multiple rejections before securing a publisher for her Harry Potter series, which later became one of the most commercially successful book franchises. Moreover, hard work fosters essential life skills such as resilience and problem-solving (sự dẻ thích nghi và giải quyết vấn đề - adaptability and analytical thinking). Those who relentlessly refine their craft and tackle challenges head-on often develop a formidable skill set (bộ kỹ năng vũng chãi - strong and well-developed abilities) that enhances their professional and personal growth.

In conclusion, while financial stability and physical attractiveness may provide advantages in certain industries, success is ultimately shaped by tenacity and diligence (sự kiên trì và chăm chỉ - persistence and hard work). Those who are committed to continuous improvement and perseverance will invariably outshine those who rely solely on external advantages.

New Vocabulary & Explanations

1. Cornerstone (nền tảng cốt lổi) - the most important part of something.

2. Affluent individuals (người giàu có) - wealthy people.

3. Hefty price tag (giá cả cao) - expensive cost.

4. Aesthetic appeal (sự hút mắt về ngoại hình) - attractiveness.

5. Chiseled features (gương mặt điển trai rõ nét) - well-defined facial structure.

6. Unwavering perseverance (sự kiên trì không lay chuyển) - relentless persistence.

7. Persevere through adversities (vượt qua nghị cảnh) - overcome difficulties.

8. Resilience and problem-solving (sự dẻ thích nghi và giải quyết vấn đề) - adaptability and analytical thinking.

9. A formidable skill set (bộ kỹ năng vũng chãi) - strong and well-developed abilities.

10. Tenacity and diligence (sự kiên trì và chăm chỉ) - persistence and hard work.

Synonyms & Antonyms

1. Cornerstone

   • Synonyms: foundation, pillar, backbone

   • Antonyms: triviality, insignificance, nonessential

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Some individuals believe that hard work and determination are the cornerstones of success."

2. Affluent individuals

   • Synonyms: wealthy people, prosperous individuals, high-net-worth individuals

   • Antonyms: poor people, underprivileged individuals, low-income earners

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Affluent individuals have the means to access high-quality education, professional networks, and business opportunities."

3. Tenacity and diligence

   • Synonyms: perseverance and dedication, persistence and hard work, determination and effort

   • Antonyms: laziness and passivity, indifference and negligence, idleness and apathy

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Success is ultimately shaped by tenacity and diligence."

Difficult Grammar Structures & Examples

1. Relative Clause:

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ "Education, in particular, often comes with a hefty price tag, which includes tuition fees, specialized training, and professional development programs."

   • (Giáo dục, đặc biệt là bỏ ra chi phí cao, bao gồm học phí, đào tạo chuyên sâu và các chương trình phát triển nghề nghiệp.)

2. Complex Sentence with Subordinating Conjunction:

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ "While financial stability and physical attractiveness may provide advantages in certain industries, success is ultimately shaped by tenacity and diligence."

   • (Mặc dù tài chính và ngoại hình mang lại lợi thế trong một số ngành, nhưng thành công cuối cùng được định hình bằng sự kiên trì và chăm chỉ.)

3. Passive Voice:

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ "J.K. Rowling was rejected by 12 different publishers before Bloomsbury agreed to publish the book."

   • (J.K. Rowling bị từ chối bởi 12 nhà xuất bản trước khi Bloomsbury chấp nhận in sách.)

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