Bên cạnh Phân tích&Bài Sửa HS đạt 7.0"The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce fertiliser (compost)" IELTS WRITING TASK 1, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think governments should spend money on faster means of public transport. However, others think money should be spent on other priorities (e.g. cost, environment). Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.
I. Đề bài
Some people think governments should spend money on faster means of public transport. However, others think money should be spent on other priorities (e.g. cost, environment). Discuss both views and give your opinion.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
- Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
- Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think governments should spend money on faster means of public transport.
- Main idea 1: Proponents of faster public transport highlight the potential benefits, such as reducing congestion on roads, lowering carbon emissions, and improving air quality.
- Supporting idea: They argue that efficient public transportation can promote sustainable urban development and create a more livable environment.
- Example: The London Underground is one of the most extensive and efficient public transportation systems in the world. The system has helped to reduce traffic congestion, improve air quality, and make London a more livable city. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "improve" tiếng anh
- Main idea 2: Additionally, faster means of public transport can provide affordable and accessible transportation options for a larger population, facilitating social inclusion and mobility.
- Supporting idea: Faster public transport can reduce travel time, which can make it more affordable for people to use.
- Example: For example, if a bus takes an hour to travel from one point to another, but a train can take only 30 minutes, then the train will be more affordable for people who need to make the trip quickly. >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Word form, Paraphrase, Antonym "affordable"trong tiếng anh
- Main idea 1: Proponents of faster public transport highlight the potential benefits, such as reducing congestion on roads, lowering carbon emissions, and improving air quality.
- Body 2: Viết về quan điểm However, others think money should be spent on other priorities (e.g. cost, environment). & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này
- Main idea 1: The cost of implementing faster public transport systems can be substantial.
- Supporting idea:
- Limited government resources should be allocated to other pressing priorities, such as healthcare, education, or infrastructure maintenance.
- Investing in existing public transport infrastructure, improving its efficiency, and addressing its shortcomings would be a more prudent use of funds.
- Example: The construction of the Shinkansen high-speed rail system in Japan cost around $90 billion. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"construction"tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 2: Opponents of faster public transport raise concerns about the potential environmental impact associated with the construction and operation of new transportation infrastructure.
- Supporting idea: They emphasize the need to prioritize sustainable and eco-friendly solutions to minimize the carbon footprint and protect natural resources.
- Example:
- The construction of the Channel Tunnel between England and France caused the deaths of thousands of bats.
- The operation of the London Underground produces around 1 million tonnes of carbon dioxide each year. >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Word form của từ "produce"
- The expansion of the Los Angeles Metro system has led to the loss of a number of wetlands.
- Main idea 1: The cost of implementing faster public transport systems can be substantial.
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think governments should spend money on faster means of public transport.
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