Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that the government should decide the subject for students to study in university. Others believe that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.
I. Đề bài
Some people think that the government should decide the subject for students to study in university. Others believe that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
- Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
- Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that the government should decide the subject for students to study in university.
- Main idea 1: A centralized approach to deciding university subjects can ensure a standardized and balanced education system. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- Supporting idea: This might help in avoiding oversaturation in certain fields and addressing skill shortages in others.
- Example: In Singapore, the Ministry of Education (MOE) is responsible for setting the curriculum for all universities in the country. This means that all students, regardless of which university they attend, will be required to take the same core subjects, such as mathematics, science, and English. This ensures that all students have a basic level of knowledge in these subjects, regardless of their individual interests or goals.
- Main idea 2: Governments can tailor educational programs to meet the specific needs of the economy and society.
- Supporting idea: They can prioritize subjects that are crucial for national development, research, innovation, and technological advancement.
- Example:
- In Finland, the government has made a concerted effort to align its educational system with the needs of the economy by focusing on STEM education (science, technology, engineering, and mathematics)
- STEM skills are in high demand in the Finnish economy, and the government believes that by investing in STEM education, they can help to create a more skilled workforce.
- Main idea 1: A centralized approach to deciding university subjects can ensure a standardized and balanced education system. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Others believe that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này
- Main idea 1: Allowing students to choose their subjects empowers them to pursue their passions, strengths, and interests.
- Supporting idea: This can lead to greater enthusiasm for learning, better academic performance, and ultimately more skilled professionals in various fields.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
- Example:
- A student who is passionate about science is allowed to take advanced science classes and participate in science fairs.
- Main idea 2: Allowing them to choose their subjects enables a more personalized educational experience, potentially leading to better engagement and retention of knowledge.
- Supporting idea: Students have unique learning styles and preferences.
- Example: A study published in the journal "Educational Psychology" found that students who were allowed to choose their own subjects had higher levels of engagement and motivation than students who were not allowed to choose their subjects.
- Main idea 1: Allowing students to choose their subjects empowers them to pursue their passions, strengths, and interests.
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people think that the government should decide the subject for students to study in university.
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