Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Films and computer games containing violence are popular now. Some people think they have a negative effect on society and should be banned. Other people think they are just a harmless relaxation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.
I. Đề bài
Films and computer games containing violence are popular now. Some people think they have a negative effect on society and should be banned. Other people think they are just a harmless relaxation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
- Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Other people think they are just a harmless relaxation
- Main idea 1: today’s people have a better understanding about the difference between the content of a movie or a game and the real life situation that that in the past.
- Supporting idea:
- The majority of individuals have no difficulty distinguishing between fiction and reality.
- Consumers of violent entertainment are simply passing the time or experiencing a vicarious thrill >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "entertainment" tiếng anh
- Example:
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 2: such scenes can rejuvenate a person’s mind and body as most people today face work and related stress. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "rejuvenate" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea: It is believed that watching violent actions or playing aggressive videogames is psychologically helpful as they allow the viewer or user to release their suppressed violent emotions in a safe way. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "release" tiếng anh
- Example:
- Main idea 1: today’s people have a better understanding about the difference between the content of a movie or a game and the real life situation that that in the past.
- Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people think they have a negative effect on society and should be banned & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này
- Main idea: Continuous exposure of such visual contents may have some psychological changes in a person, when compared to a normal person.
- Supporting idea:
- The effects can range from some sorts of aggression to felonies such as rape and murder.
- A recent report shows that during counseling sessions in prisons, most criminals revealed that they were influenced by heroic scenes of their favorite actors on the big screen.
- Studies have shown that consistent exposure to foul language and bad conduct adversely influences people, and they begin to perceive violence as normal.
- Example:
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea: Continuous exposure of such visual contents may have some psychological changes in a person, when compared to a normal person.
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Other people think they are just a harmless relaxation
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