Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn 🔥Phân tích "Fast food is becoming popular worldwide. Some say that it will affect our lifestyles and diet. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Bài mẫu, kèm dịch & giải thích từ vựng & cấu trúc grammar khó TUTOR)(IELTS General training HCM 3/3/2025)
I. Đề bài
Fast food is becoming popular worldwide. Some say that it will affect our lifestyles and diet. Do you agree or disagree?
II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
1. Cách viết "totally agree"
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- Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Main idea 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE [VIẾT VỀ lifestyles] Fast food is often consumed on the go or while engaging in other activities, promoting a sedentary lifestyle.
- Example: Busy professionals working long hours often choose the convenience of swinging by a drive-thru for a quick burger and fries on their way home, gradually developing a habit of relying on fast food and neglecting healthier, home-cooked options. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "habit" & Collocation với "habit"
- Supporting idea:
- The convenience of fast food may discourage individuals from cooking at home or taking the time to sit down for a balanced meal.
- This sedentary behavior, coupled with a lack of physical activity, can contribute to weight gain and decreased overall fitness levels.
- Main idea 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE [VIẾT VỀ diet] Fast food tends to be high in calories, unhealthy fats, and added sugars, often lacking essential nutrients.
- Supporting idea: Regular consumption of fast food can lead to weight gain, obesity, and associated health problems such as cardiovascular diseases and diabetes. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "habitat" tiếng anh
- Example: A large-scale prospective study conducted by the Harvard School of Public Health involving over 120,000 participants found that frequent fast food consumption was significantly associated with weight gain and an increased risk of developing type 2 diabetes.
- Main idea 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE [VIẾT VỀ lifestyles] Fast food is often consumed on the go or while engaging in other activities, promoting a sedentary lifestyle.
2. Cách viết "Partly"
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- Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng PARTLY có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Intro câu 2, conclusion: Partly agree với quan điểm đề cho
- Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages của fast food
- Main idea 1: Fast food establishments have revolutionized the way people consume food, primarily by providing quick and convenient options
- Supporting idea:
- In today's fast-paced society, where time is of the essence, fast food offers an appealing solution for individuals with busy schedules. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "lifestyle" tiếng anh
- The ability to grab a meal on the go allows people to efficiently manage their time, enabling them to balance work, family, and other commitments.
- Example: The emergence of delivery services further enhances convenience, making fast food accessible at the click of a button.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 2: Fast food establishments offer a diverse menu that caters to a wide range of tastes and preferences.
- Supporting idea: This variety allows individuals with different dietary needs and preferences to find something suitable.
- Example: Fast food chains like Subway or Chipotle offer customization options that allow customers to personalize their meals based on their preferences, whether they follow specific diets like vegetarian, vegan, gluten-free, or prefer meat-based options.
- Main idea 1: Fast food establishments have revolutionized the way people consume food, primarily by providing quick and convenient options
- Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages của fast food
- Main idea 1: [VIẾT VỀ lifestyles] Fast food is often consumed on the go or while engaging in other activities, promoting a sedentary lifestyle.
- Supporting idea:
- The convenience of fast food may discourage individuals from cooking at home or taking the time to sit down for a balanced meal. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ"form"tiếng anh
- This sedentary behavior, coupled with a lack of physical activity, can contribute to weight gain and decreased overall fitness levels.
- Example: Busy professionals working long hours often choose the convenience of swinging by a drive-thru for a quick burger and fries on their way home, gradually developing a habit of relying on fast food and neglecting healthier, home-cooked options.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 2: [VIẾT VỀ diet] Fast food tends to be high in calories, unhealthy fats, and added sugars, often lacking essential nutrients.
- Supporting idea: Regular consumption of fast food can lead to weight gain, obesity, and associated health problems such as cardiovascular diseases and diabetes. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- Example: A large-scale prospective study conducted by the Harvard School of Public Health involving over 120,000 participants found that frequent fast food consumption was significantly associated with weight gain and an increased risk of developing type 2 diabetes.
- Main idea 1: [VIẾT VỀ lifestyles] Fast food is often consumed on the go or while engaging in other activities, promoting a sedentary lifestyle.
- Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages của fast food
- Intro câu 2, conclusion: Partly agree với quan điểm đề cho
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
The global proliferation (sự gia tăng nhanh chóng - rapid increase) of fast food has raised concerns about its potential effects on people's dietary habits (thói quen ăn uống - eating patterns) and overall lifestyles. I unequivocally (rõ ràng, dứt khoát - clearly and without doubt) agree that the increasing preference for fast food has detrimental (gây hại - harmful) consequences on both aspects.
A major ramification (hậu quả nghiêm trọng - serious consequence) of fast food consumption is its impact on lifestyle. Modern individuals, particularly time-strapped (bận rộn - having little free time) professionals, frequently resort to grab-and-go (mang đi ngay - designed for quick consumption) meals, which fosters a sedentary existence (lối sống ít vỪdn động - a lifestyle with little physical activity). The convenience of fast food discourages home-cooked meals, leading to haphazard eating patterns (thói quen ăn uống lôn xộn - irregular and unstructured eating habits). Furthermore, a sustained dependence (sự phụ thuộc lâu dài - long-term reliance) on such meals can cause individuals to neglect essential aspects of their well-being, such as mindful eating and regular physical activity, which in turn contributes to compromised fitness levels (thể lực bị ảnh hưởng - reduced physical health).>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
Equally concerning is the impact of fast food on diet. These meals are typically laden with (chứa nhiều - heavily filled with) unhealthy fats, excessive sugars, and artificial additives while being nutrient-deficient (thiếu dưỡng chất - lacking essential nutrients). A predilection (xu hướng thích - preference) for fast food has been strongly linked to ballooning obesity rates (tỷ lệ béo phì tăng vột - rapidly increasing obesity levels) and a myriad of (rất nhiều - a large number of) health complications such as cardiovascular ailments (các bệnh tim mạch - heart-related diseases) and type 2 diabetes. A large-scale longitudinal study (nghiên cứu dài hạn - a study conducted over a long period) by the Harvard School of Public Health demonstrated a direct correlation (mối liên hệ trực tiếp - direct connection) between frequent fast food consumption and significant weight gain over time, emphasizing its far-reaching consequences (hậu quả lan rộng - extensive effects) on public health.
In conclusion, the widespread embracement (sự tiếp nhận rộng rãi - broad acceptance) of fast food precipitates (gây ra nhanh chóng - causes suddenly) an unhealthy lifestyle and poor dietary habits, making it a pressing global concern.
New Vocabulary:
Proliferation - (sự gia tăng nhanh chóng) - rapid increase
Dietary habits - (thói quen ăn uống) - eating patterns
Unequivocally - (rõ ràng, dứt khoát) - clearly and without doubt
Detrimental - (gây hại) - harmful
Ramification - (hậu quả nghiêm trọng) - serious consequence
Time-strapped - (bận rộn) - having little free time
Grab-and-go - (mang đi ngay) - designed for quick consumption
Sedentary existence - (lối sống ít vỪdn động) - a lifestyle with little physical activity
Haphazard eating patterns - (thói quen ăn uống lôn xộn) - irregular and unstructured eating habits
Sustained dependence - (sự phụ thuộc lâu dài) - long-term reliance
Compromised fitness levels - (thể lực bị ảnh hưởng) - reduced physical health
Laden with - (chứa nhiều) - heavily filled with
Nutrient-deficient - (thiếu dưỡng chất) - lacking essential nutrients
Predilection - (xu hướng thích) - preference
Ballooning obesity rates - (tỷ lệ béo phì tăng vột) - rapidly increasing obesity levels
A myriad of - (rất nhiều) - a large number of
Cardiovascular ailments - (các bệnh tim mạch) - heart-related diseases
Longitudinal study - (nghiên cứu dài hạn) - a study conducted over a long period
Direct correlation - (mối liên hệ trực tiếp) - direct connection
Far-reaching consequences - (hậu quả lan rộng) - extensive effects
Widespread embracement - (sự tiếp nhận rộng rãi) - broad acceptance
Precipitates - (gây ra nhanh chóng) - causes suddenly
Synonyms & Antonyms:
Proliferation: expansion, surge, escalation | decline, reduction, suppression
Detrimental: harmful, damaging, adverse | beneficial, advantageous, constructive
Sedentary existence: inactive lifestyle, sluggish routine, motionless living | active lifestyle, dynamic routine, energetic living
Difficult Grammar Structures:
A major ramification of fast food consumption is its impact on lifestyle.
(Một hậu quả nghiêm trọng của việc tiêu thụ thức ăn nhanh là ảnh hưởng của nó đến lối sống.)
Cấu trúc danh từ ghép và sở hữu
A predilection for fast food has been strongly linked to ballooning obesity rates.
(Xu hướng thích thức ăn nhanh có liên quan chặt chẽ đến tỷ lệ béo phì tăng vọt.)
Cấu trúc bị động nâng cao (has been strongly linked to)
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