Phân tích"Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and excercise everyday will be healthier and happier .However many ealderly are suffering from loneliness and lack of fitness. Discuss the cause and solution" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 14/12/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and excercise everyday will be healthier and happier .However many ealderly are suffering from loneliness and lack of fitness. Discuss the cause and solution" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and excercise everyday will be healthier and happier. However many ealderly are suffering from loneliness and lack of fitness. Discuss the cause and solution

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
• Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1: Viết về cause 
  • Main idea 1: (Viết về suffering from loneliness)  the rising popularity of nuclear families
    • Supporting idea:
      • people are more inclined towards single family concept instead of living in a joint family. 
      • Young generation does not hesitate to abandon their parents or grandparents in a village to lead a better life in metropolitan cities  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Their children have migrated to cities in search of better employment)
    • Example: In the case of Mrs. Kaushal, a widowed farmer in rural India, her sons' migration to Delhi, fueled by aspirations of urban success, has left her grappling with the solitude of their ancestral farm
  • Main idea 2: (Viết về lack of fitness) older adults not active due to discomfort and pain
    • Supporting idea:
      • Back pain, sore knees, heart conditions, and lung disorder can be barriers to exercise and limit motivation.
      • Overweight and obesity can be major problems in influencing healthy activity in older adult
    • Example: At 72 years old, Mrs. Garcia grapples with obesity and diabetes, finding even basic activities like climbing stairs challenging due to breathlessness and exhaustion, while shame and fear of judgment hinder her from participating in exercise classes or going to the gym, perpetuating a cycle of physical inactivity that exacerbates her weight gain and worsens her health conditions.
• Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2: : Viết về solution
  • Main idea 1: spend time and get along with others (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: the older generation people can join local clubs with their peers and friends to reduce loneliness)
    • Supporting idea:
    • Example: 
  • Main idea 2: old people should speak with their health care provider about the discomfort and symptoms
    • Supporting idea: 
      • The old age people should join gymnasium and yoga classes , and also they should work and do some calisthenics to remain fit and healthy.
      • Discomfort and pain can be managed through medication and alleviated with physical therapy
      • Chronic conditions, such as heart disease, arthritis, and diabetes can benefit from low exertion exercise and flexibility training. >> Ngoài ra IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng SUCH AS trong tiếng anh
    • Example: In many cases of discomfort, elderly exercise options like water aerobics is a good option to lessen joint impact.

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