Phân tích "Some ex-prisoners commit crimes after being released from the prison. What do you think is the cause? How can it be solved?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích & Sửa đề"Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and the government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" (ngày21/11/2020), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some ex-prisoners commit crimes after being released from the prison. What do you think is the cause? How can it be solved?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some ex-prisoners commit crimes after being released from the prison. What do you think is the cause? How can it be solved?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: Some criminals believe that they will not be caught or punished for their crimes, so they continue to do them. 
      • Supporting idea: This is especially true for crimes that are not easily detected, such as drug dealing or fraud.
      • Example:  Eric Frein, a white supremacist who believed the government was corrupt and justified in killing police officers, evaded capture for 48 days before being arrested after a shootout.
    • Main idea 2: Some criminals commit crimes out of desperation, as a way to make money or get food and shelter. 
      • Supporting idea: They may feel that they have no other way to survive, so they resort to crime.
      • Example: A study by the National Institute of Justice found that 74% of inmates in state prisons reported that they committed their crimes to get money.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: It is necessary for the government to improve law enforcement capabilities
      • Supporting idea: This includes increasing the number of police officers, providing them with better training, and giving them the tools they need to investigate crimes.
      • Example: After experiencing a surge in gun violence in 2020, Chicago increased the number of police officers and funding for training and equipment, which resulted in a 30% decrease in homicides in 2021.
    • Main idea 2: Providing them with job training and education programs can help them to get back on their feet and become productive members of society.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Many ex-offenders have low levels of education and job skills, which makes it difficult for them to find legitimate employment. 
        • Job training and education programs can not only help ex-offenders learn new skills and improve their job prospects, but also give them a sense of purpose and direction, and help them to build a better future for themselves.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
      • Example: A study by the Rand Corporation found that ex-offenders who participated in job training programs were more likely to be employed and less likely to reoffend than ex-offenders who did not participate in job training programs.

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