Giải đề"More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending a short time in communities in poorer countries doing unpaid work such as teaching ore building houses. Why? Who benefits more from this, the community or these young people?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending a short time in communities in poorer countries doing unpaid work such as teaching ore building houses. Why? Who benefits more from this, the community or these young people?

Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi số 1: Why are they doing this?

Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi số 2: Who gets more benefit, the community or the young people?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: Many young people see volunteering abroad as an opportunity to learn about other cultures and ways of life.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic "community"tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: By immersing themselves in a different culture, they gain firsthand knowledge of diverse ways of life, traditions, and societal norms.
      • Example: 
        • Volunteering in a rural community in a developing country allows teenagers to not only assist with local projects but also engage with the community, learn their language, and understand their challenges, fostering cultural sensitivity and a deeper appreciation for global diversity
        • This cross-cultural understanding contributes to a more interconnected and tolerant world when young volunteers share their experiences back home.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Main idea 2: Volunteering abroad can be a way for young people to challenge themselves, develop new skills, and gain valuable life experiences.
      • Supporting idea: Engaging in volunteer work abroad often involves stepping out of one's comfort zone, presenting a unique chance for personal challenges and growth.
      • Example: 
        • Volunteering in a foreign country exposes teenagers to unfamiliar environments, language barriers, and new cultural norms, fostering resilience, adaptability, and problem-solving skills
        • The hands-on nature of such experiences also cultivates practical skills like teamwork and leadership, serving as a valuable asset for future endeavors in education or the workforce, where adaptability and collaboration are increasingly essential.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2: In terms of who benefits more from this type of volunteer work, it is likely that both the community and the volunteers can benefit in different ways
    • Main idea 1: The community can benefit from the volunteers' contributions, whether it's teaching or building houses, and from the exposure to different cultures and ideas. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The exchange of knowledge and experiences fosters a more enriched and open-minded community, promoting a broader perspective on various issues. 
        • This interaction can lead to cultural exchange programs, community events, and a more interconnected and harmonious society.
      • Example: 
        • For instance, a group of volunteers teaching English in a local school not only imparts valuable knowledge but also enhances the educational resources available to the community. 
        • Similarly, volunteers involved in construction projects contribute to the development of infrastructure, addressing local needs.
    • Main idea 2: The volunteers themselves can benefit from the personal growth, career development, and cultural exchange opportunities that come with volunteering abroad.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng BENEFIT (động từ, danh từ) & BENEFICIAL
      • Supporting idea: These experiences can be transformative, enhancing the volunteers' adaptability, intercultural communication skills, and resilience, all of which are valuable in both personal and professional contexts.
      • Example: A volunteer teaching English in a foreign school, for example, not only imparts language skills but also learns about the local customs and traditions, fostering cultural exchange.

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