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I. Đề bài
Some people believe that printed books are no longer necessary in this digital era as all writings can be stored electronically. Other think that printed books still play an important role. Discuss both view and give your opinion
II. Từ vựng
III. Phân tích
- Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
- Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm “Some people believe that printed books are no longer necessary in this digital era as all writings can be stored electronically”
- Main idea 1: Proponents of digital books argue that electronic storage offers unparalleled convenience and accessibility.
- Supporting idea: Thousands of books can be stored on a single device, making it easy to carry an entire library in one's pocket.
- Example: For instance, students can access textbooks, research papers, and novels from their tablets or e-readers without the physical burden of carrying heavy books >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "expose" tiếng anh
- Main idea 2: Another significant point is the environmental benefit.
- Supporting idea: Digital books eliminate the need for paper, reducing deforestation and the carbon footprint associated with printing and distributing physical books.
- Example: For example, the reduction in paper use can save millions of trees each year, contributing to environmental conservation.
- Main idea 1: Proponents of digital books argue that electronic storage offers unparalleled convenience and accessibility.
- Body 2: Viết về quan điểm”Other think that printed books still play an important role” & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này
- Main idea 1: not everyone adapts to reading on electric devices (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Some groups of people tend to be reluctant to learn how to surf on the internet to search information)
- Supporting idea:
- The elderly have already become used to reading printed books, magazines and newspapers, which are the sources where they receive information.
- Another typical group should be those who are concerned with the radiation of computer screen when many people have to work with computer for several hours a day and want to read printed stories to reduce eyes imitation instead of keeping being exposed to screens >> If all the information is spread through electric device, people's eyesight will suffer more burdens.
- Example: A study conducted by Pew Research Center found that a significant percentage of adults aged 65 and older still prefer printed materials over digital ones.
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 2: the access to internet has not equally bean spread all over the world.
- Supporting idea:
- This is because online service is only available in advanced countries and in some major cities of developing and poor countries.
- For people who live in places without the Internet, traditional printed books are the predominant source of knowledge >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "knowledge" tiếng anh
- This is why many celebrities and charitable organizations mainly donate books to them instead of computers.
- Example: For example, in some mountain areas in Vietnam, there are no signals for mobile phone, let alone downloading information. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng LET ALONE trong tiếng anh
- Supporting idea:
- Main idea 1: not everyone adapts to reading on electric devices (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Some groups of people tend to be reluctant to learn how to surf on the internet to search information)
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm “Some people believe that printed books are no longer necessary in this digital era as all writings can be stored electronically”
IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:
As the digital age progresses, the increasing reliance on computers and electronic devices for information has sparked a debate over the necessity of printed books, magazines, and newspapers, with some viewing traditional print media as obsolete while others argue for its continued significance. This essay will discuss both perspectives and argue in favor of the continued relevance of printed materials.
On the one hand, proponents of digital books argue that electronic storage offers unparalleled convenience and accessibility. Thousands of books can be stored on a single device, making it easy to carry an entire library in one's pocket. For instance, students can access textbooks, research papers, and novels from their tablets or e-readers without the physical burden of carrying heavy books. Another significant point is the environmental benefit. Digital books eliminate the need for paper, reducing deforestation and the carbon footprint associated with printing and distributing physical books. For example, the reduction in paper use can save millions of trees each year, contributing to environmental conservation.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
On the other hand, many, myself included, believe that printed books still play an important role in society. Firstly, not everyone adapts easily to reading on electronic devices. The elderly, for instance, are accustomed to printed books, magazines, and newspapers as their primary sources of information. A study conducted by Pew Research Center found that a significant percentage of adults aged 65 and older still prefer printed materials over digital ones. Moreover, internet access is not equally distributed worldwide. In many developing and poor countries, online services are limited to major cities. In remote areas without internet access, traditional printed books remain the primary source of knowledge. For example, in some mountainous areas in Vietnam, there are no signals for mobile phones, let alone the capability to download information.
In conclusion, while digital devices offer numerous benefits, I do believe that printed books, magazines, and newspapers still hold an essential place in our lives, particularly for those who are less adaptable to technology and those without reliable internet access.
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