Phân tích essay"In many countries, the proportion of old people is increasing. Do you think the positive effects of this trend outweigh its negative influence? " IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh phân tích đề thi thật task 1 viết thư của IELTS GENERAL được sửa rất kĩ bởi giáo viên cho bạn học sinh đã đi thi ngày đó và đạt 6.0 nhé, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích essay"In many countries, the proportion of old people is increasing. Do you think the positive effects of this trend outweigh its negative influence? " IELTS WRITING TASK 2

In many countries, the proportion of old people is increasing. Do you think the positive effects of this trend outweigh its negative influence?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (advantages>disadvantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
      • Main idea: seniors possess abundant experience and as such they can offer valuable advice to young people  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "advise" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Seniors have lived through various life experiences, including successes and failures, and have gained wisdom from these experiences that can guide and inspire younger generations.
      • Example: Ruth Bader Ginsburg, a brilliant U.S. Supreme Court Justice from 1993 until her passing in 2020, was a passionate advocate for gender equality and a role model who offered valuable advice to young people on achieving their goals
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
      • Main idea: an increase in the number of old people means a greater pool of volunteers for community and government projects.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "advice" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: here are groups of elderly people established to provide free education for poverty-hit children or to clean the environment.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  CÁCH PARAPHRASE TỪ "ADVISE" TIẾNG ANH
      • Example: For example, we often see old people in developed countries engage in charity work to provide shelter and food for the homeless in their neighborhoods. 
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: seniors possess abundant experience and as such they can offer valuable advice to young people  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "advise" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: Seniors have lived through various life experiences, including successes and failures, and have gained wisdom from these experiences that can guide and inspire younger generations.
        • Example: Ruth Bader Ginsburg, a brilliant U.S. Supreme Court Justice from 1993 until her passing in 2020, was a passionate advocate for gender equality and a role model who offered valuable advice to young people on achieving their goals
      • Main idea 2: an increase in the number of old people means a greater pool of volunteers for community and government projects.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "advice" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: here are groups of elderly people established to provide free education for poverty-hit children or to clean the environment.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  CÁCH PARAPHRASE TỪ "ADVISE" TIẾNG ANH
        • Example: For example, we often see old people in developed countries engage in charity work to provide shelter and food for the homeless in their neighborhoods. 
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1:  lack of young labor workforce would cause stagnation for the growth of individual businesses and the global economy as a whole  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "cause" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: This is because little innovation may take place in this circumstance.
        • Example: many first world countries whose proportion of senior citizens is higher than that of young people, such as Japan, are already experiencing these undesirable impacts
      • Main idea 2: Both governments and businesses will have to pay for increased retirement pensions and health care costs
        • Supporting idea: tax-payers will have to bear a greater financial burden, and the young workforce will have to work harder and care for the elderly at the same time.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "Bear" tiếng anh 

Các khóa học IELTS online 1 kèm 1 - 100% cam kết đạt target 6.0 - 7.0 - 8.0 - Đảm bảo đầu ra - Thi không đạt, học lại FREE

>> IELTS Intensive Writing - Sửa bài chi tiết

>> IELTS Intensive Listening

>> IELTS Intensive Reading

>> IELTS Intensive Speaking