Giải đề"People have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh hướng dẫn PHƯƠNG PHÁP HỌC IELTS WRITING HIỆU QUẢ, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn thêm Giải đề"People have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

People have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Với dạng outweigh cách dễ làm nhất là sẽ đi theo 1 hướng TOTALLY, nếu IELTS TUTOR theo hướng advantages outweigh disadvantages thì sẽ chia bố cục như sau:
  • Câu 2 intro: advantages outweigh disadvantages vì 2 lí do sau:
  • Body 1: lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages outweigh disadvantages (ở đây có thể tập trung vào communication technology & nên đề cập đủ cả work & live như đề cho)
    • Có thể triển khai: 
      • Communication technology (internet, các trang web cũng như mạng xã hội) giúp con người dễ dàng tìm công ăn việc làm tốt online chứ không cần thiết phải đến một nơi phát triển để làm việc như lúc trước nữa (Ví dụ như có rất nhiều người nước ngoài làm công việc IT vẫn lương của Tây nhưng sống ở Việt Nam với chi phí rẻ và cuộc sống nhẹ nhàng hơn)
      • Ngoài ra, Communication technology giúp dễ dàng liên lạc với gia đình, đối tác... nên việc người ta sống ở đâu họ muốn gần như không phải là vấn đề nữa 
  • Body 2: lí do thứ 2 vì sao advantages outweigh disadvantages (ở đây có thể tập trung vào transportation & nên đề cập đủ cả work & live như đề cho)
    • Có thể triển khai:
      • Transportation (nhất là cheap airlines) giúp di chuyển dễ dàng giữa các quốc gia và các nơi trong cùng một quốc gia nên việc người ta sống hay làm việc ở đâu cũng rất thuận tiện. (Ví dụ như sống một nơi và kinh doanh ở nơi khác chỉ cần bay đi bay về tuỳ thích) 
  • Conclusion: paraphrase lại câu 2 intro 

Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)

• • • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: The ability to work and live anywhere provides individuals with greater flexibility and mobility. 
        • Supporting idea: This can be especially beneficial for those seeking diverse cultural experiences, exploring new career opportunities, or accommodating personal preferences.
        • Example: A study by Stanford University's Institute for Economic Policy Research found that telecommuting arrangements allow for a better work-life balance and increased employee satisfaction >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Main idea 2: The globalization of work and living environments fosters cultural exchange. 
        • Supporting idea: Individuals have the opportunity to interact with people from different backgrounds, fostering a more interconnected and understanding world.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: The physical distance from family and friends can lead to social disconnection and feelings of isolation. 
        • Supporting idea: Building and maintaining meaningful relationships may become challenging in a constantly changing and mobile environment.
      • Main idea 2: Adapting to new cultures and societies can be demanding. 
        • Supporting idea: Differences in language, customs, and work practices may create cultural challenges that individuals need to navigate, potentially leading to stress or misunderstandings.
        • Example: In the context of an American technology company opening a branch in Japan, the significant cultural differences in language, customs, and work practices pose challenges for expatriate employees, particularly due to the high-context nature of Japanese business communication, relying on implicit meaning and shared cultural understanding, in contrast to the low-context communication style prevalent in many Western cultures.

In the era of advanced communication technology and transportation, individuals now experience unparalleled freedom to work and live anywhere in the world. In my opinion, this trend carries both positive and negative consequences in equal measures.

On the one hand, there are numerous reasons why this tendency is positive. Firstly, the ability to work and live anywhere empowers individuals with unprecedented flexibility and autonomy in shaping their lifestyles and careers. This newfound freedom allows for a better work-life balance and increased job satisfaction, as evidenced by studies such as the one conducted by Stanford University's Institute for Economic Policy Research. Secondly, the globalization of work and living environments fosters valuable cultural exchange. In fact, individuals now have the opportunity to interact with people from different backgrounds, contributing to a more interconnected and understanding world.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

On the other hand, the trend of working and living anywhere is not without its drawbacks. To begin with, the physical distance from family and friends can lead to social disconnection and feelings of isolation. This is because as individuals embrace a constantly changing and mobile lifestyle, building and maintaining meaningful relationships become increasingly challenging, with potential consequences for emotional well-being. Moreover, adapting to new cultures and societies, another negative aspect of this trend, can be demanding. For instance, the high-context nature of Japanese business communication poses significant challenges for expatriate employees from Western cultures, as illustrated by the scenario of an American technology company opening a branch in Japan.

In conclusion, in my opinion, the trend of global mobility in the age of advanced communication technology and transportation has both positive and negative consequences.

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