Bên cạnh phân tích đề thi thật IELTS WRITING TASK 2 dạng Advantages & Disadvantages, IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề essay về "child care centre & family members" IELTS WRITING TASK 2
I. Đề bài
Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Đề tương tự khác:
Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
II. Từ vựng
Từ vựng topic children IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp
III. Phân tích
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Dạng bài này thuộc dạng discuss both views & give your opinion essay mà IELTS TUTOR đã hướng dẫn kĩ, đối với các bạn lớp IELTS ONLINE 1 kèm 1 trong chương trình học có bài tương tự về nên giáo dục trẻ thành người có ích ở nhà hay ở trường cũng tương tự nên lấy lại để ôn nhé
- Nếu đề này IELTS TUTOR có quan điểm đồng ý với quan điểm này family members such as grandma will experience can give children best care thì sẽ chia bố cục:
- Body 1: viết về quan điểm 2 (others think childcare centres provide the best care)
- Main idea 1: these centres are professional organisations, and their staff are well trained, so they have good babysitting skills. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "STAFF" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea: they know how to cope with these children in various circumstances or unexpected accidents
- Example: when a child falls over and gets himself injured, the well trained staff in the care centres will act quickly and give first aid
- Main idea 2: child care organisations have many children from different backgrounds
- Supporting idea: As children have a company of peers playing along with, they would soon develop these essential skills compared to staying home with grandparents >> This helps children mingle with them and make friends with their peers which might increase their communication and language abilities. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "along with" - Idiom
- Example:
- Main idea 1: these centres are professional organisations, and their staff are well trained, so they have good babysitting skills. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "STAFF" tiếng anh
- Body 2: viết về quan điểm 1 (other family members like grandparents can take care of their children) & nêu rõ là mình đồng ý với quan điểm này
- Main idea 1: grandparents are family members, so they love their grandchildren more than other people do (HOẶC: on grounds of their blood relationship, grandparents are definitely willing to spend more time taking care of their grandchildren than childcare centers do)
- Supporting idea: They tend to spend more time and take more effort to care for their grandchildren. >< care centres have to take care of several kids at the same time. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "tend" tiếng anh
- Example:
- Main idea 2: Children are more likely to be family oriented when they grow up (HOẶC: children raised by grandparents pick up family values much faster)
- Supporting idea: Children brought up by grandparents would receive moral lessons and traditional family values >> This helps tighten the family bonding as people feel a common sense of interest
- Example: The fact that they can spend several hours telling their grandchildren fairy tales and traditional stories about family will create an invisible bond between family members and tie up the relationship among generations. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng The fact that
- Main idea 1: grandparents are family members, so they love their grandchildren more than other people do (HOẶC: on grounds of their blood relationship, grandparents are definitely willing to spend more time taking care of their grandchildren than childcare centers do)
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