Phân tích đề essay"advantages and disadvantages of Facebook"

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR cũng Phân tích đề essay "advantages and disadvantages of Facebook".

Write a paragraph about advantages and disavantages of Facebook.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Đối với bài này, có thể chia bố cục 1 đoạn paragraph như sau:
  • Viết về advantages:
    • Main idea 1:  Facebook helps us connect & share with the people  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Facebook lets us connect to different people from anywhere in the world)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • It helps you learn more about the culture, the values, the customs and the traditions of the other countries in the world.
        • Many people especially students use Facebook chat for group discussions while some businesses use it for short meetings >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng & ideas topic "BUSINESS" IELTS
      • Example: We can connect and find our old school friends and college friends, and we can connect with our relatives.
    • Main idea 2: Netizens can sell and promote products or the services, and thus you increase the possibilities of making money on the Internet >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng topic Money IELTS 
      • Supporting idea: 
      • Example: 
  • Viết về disadvantages:
    • Main idea 1:  One of the major concerns and disadvantages of Facebook has to do with Facebook’s privacy >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng & Paraphrase từ "privacy" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Time-consuming
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Being one of the best ways to stay updated about what your friends are doing, people spend too much time on this vast social networking site.
        • Spending too much time on Facebook might make students Facebook addicts, and they might end up wasting too much time >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Word form của "waste"
      • Example: 

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