Phân tích"Environmental damage is the problem of most countries. What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 4/6/2022)

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Environmental damage is the problem of most countries. What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 What factors damage the environment  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   Cách dùng danh từ "damage" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 1: Gas emissions from factories and exhaust fumes from vehicles lead to global warming, which may have a devastating effect on the planet in the future. 
      • Supporting idea: As the human population increases, we are also producing ever greater quantities of waste, which contaminates the earth and pollutes rivers and oceans.
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Deforestation causes major environmental problems   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase "environmental problems" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: This is because it decreases the number of trees, which clean the environment, provide oxygen and also affect rain patterns.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2  and who should take responsibility?
    • Main idea 1: Humans are responsible for the current environmental situation
      • Supporting idea: It seems impossible to achieve any noticeable result in this field without the participation of vast majority of individuals.
      • Example: 
        • For instance, a simple lifestyle change like introducing the separation of household rubbish can make recycling projects more convenient and efficient. Moreover, consumers can reduce their usage of plastic items and, in turn, less plastic waste will contaminate the environment.
        • They can take public transport rather than driving, choose products with less packaging, and recycle as much as possible. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
        • Most supermarkets now provide reusable bags for shoppers as well as ‘banks’ for recycling glass, plastic and paper in their car parks. By reusing and recycling, we can help to reduce waste.
    • Main idea 2: The government should also take responsibility for the impact humans have on the environment
      • Supporting idea: 
        • It is a key responsibility of the government to protect the environment by spending state funds on research and modern equipment. 
        • Politicians usually have access to resources to educate people about environmental problems and promote the most important ecological projects on all levels, ranging from special courses at schools to TV shows and websites related to this topic  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The government should discourage citizens from using personal vehicles by charging high taxes and additional fees)
        • They could introduce laws to limit emissions from factories or to force companies to use renewable energy from solar, wind or water power. 
        • They could also impose ‘green taxes’ on drivers and airline companies. In this way, people would be encouraged to use public transport and to take fewer flights abroad, therefore reducing emissions.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase từ "public transport"
      • Example: Countries where legislation protects the ecology, for example Norway, have achieved visible results and overcame most environmental problems.

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