Phân tích "During the 20th century, contact between different parts from the world has developed rapidly thanks to air travel and telecommunication. To what extent do you agree that societies benefit from the increased contact and closer relationships with foreigners brought by international tourism and business?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 6/1/2023 & 10/3/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "During the 20th century, contact between different parts from the world has developed rapidly thanks to air travel and telecommunication. To what extent do you agree that societies benefit from the increased contact and closer relationships with foreigners brought by international tourism and business?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 6/1/2023)

During the 20th century, contact between different parts from the world has developed rapidly thanks to air travel and telecommunication. To what extent do you agree that societies benefit from the increased contact and closer relationships with foreigners brought by international tourism and business?

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: (VIẾT VỀ international tourism) International tourism facilitates understanding 
      • Supporting idea: (exposure to foreign culture leads to a mutual understanding) >> visiting a foreign country will most likely help tourists to understand more about the local customs and lifestyles >> embracing cultural differences is key to establishing and maintaining social relationships in this day and age    >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn Cách dùng động từ "expose" tiếng anh
      • Example: International tourism promotes mutual understanding as exposure to foreign cultures, such as experiencing traditional customs in a foreign country like Japan, fosters appreciation and facilitates the embrace of cultural differences, crucial for establishing and maintaining social relationships in our interconnected world. 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: (VIẾT VỀ business) It also increases global competition among multinational companies, which drives prices down and creates a larger variety of choices for consumers   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Ideas & Từ vựng topic "TOÀN CẦU HOÁ - GLOBALIZATION" 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Whether it is a product or service, a multinational company has to ensure its customers superior quality.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ direct như động từ
        • Customers have the privilege to choose from a range of options.
        • Lowered costs help people in both developing and already-developed countries live better on less money.
      • Example: A study by the Peterson Institute for International Economics found that increased trade due to globalization has led to a significant decrease in consumer prices for manufactured goods in developed countries

IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ

It is true that international tourism and business have significantly increased interactions among different societies worldwide. I totally agree that this growing connection brings numerous benefits (n: advantages or positive results – lợi ích) to societies.

On the one hand, international tourism (n: cross-border travel for leisure – du lịch quốc tế) serves as a powerful catalyst (n: something that causes change – chất xúc tác mạnh mẽ) for promoting mutual understanding among people from different backgrounds. When travelers visit foreign destinations, they are exposed (v: made to experience – được tiếp xúc) to local customs and lifestyles, which broadens their horizons and nurtures tolerance. For instance, tourists who participate in traditional ceremonies (n: long-established cultural events – nghi lễ truyền thống) in Japan or India are more likely to appreciate cultural differences and reduce prejudice. In today’s interconnected world (adj phrase: having close global links – thế giới được kết nối chặt chẽ), embracing diversity not only enhances social harmony but also lays the groundwork for lasting international friendships.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

On the other hand, cross-border business cooperation brings tremendous economic advantages. The expansion of multinational corporations (n: companies operating in multiple countries – tập đoàn đa quốc gia) has intensified global competition, driving prices down and improving the quality of goods and services. Whether selling products or offering services, global companies must ensure superior standards to retain (v: keep – duy trì) customer loyalty. Consumers, therefore, enjoy a wider range of options and more affordable prices. For example, a study by the Peterson Institute for International Economics (n: a global research organization – Viện Kinh tế Quốc tế Peterson) revealed that globalization has led to a sharp decline in consumer prices for manufactured goods in developed nations, ultimately improving living standards for millions.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that greater contact between societies through international tourism and business has brought about profound cultural understanding and substantial economic growth worldwide.

🔹New Vocabulary List

1. benefits (n: advantages or positive results – lợi ích)
   Synonyms: advantages, merits, upsides
   Antonyms: drawbacks, disadvantages, downsides
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “I totally agree that this growing connection brings numerous benefits to societies.”

2. international tourism (n: cross-border travel for leisure – du lịch quốc tế)
   Synonyms: global travel, overseas tourism, international travel
   Antonyms: domestic tourism, local travel, regional tourism
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “International tourism serves as a powerful catalyst for promoting mutual understanding.”

3. catalyst (n: something that causes change – chất xúc tác mạnh mẽ)
   Synonyms: stimulus, trigger, driver
   Antonyms: hindrance, obstacle, deterrent
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “It serves as a powerful catalyst for promoting mutual understanding.”

4. exposed (v: made to experience – được tiếp xúc)
   Synonyms: introduced, subjected, revealed
   Antonyms: shielded, protected, hidden
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “They are exposed to local customs and lifestyles.”

5. traditional ceremonies (n: long-established cultural events – nghi lễ truyền thống)
   Synonyms: customary rituals, cultural festivals, heritage events
   Antonyms: modern practices, contemporary events, casual gatherings
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Tourists who participate in traditional ceremonies in Japan are more likely to appreciate cultural differences.”

6. interconnected world (adj phrase: having close global links – thế giới được kết nối chặt chẽ)
   Synonyms: globalized society, networked world, interlinked world
   Antonyms: isolated world, fragmented society, disconnected world
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “In today’s interconnected world, embracing diversity enhances social harmony.”

7. multinational corporations (n: companies operating in multiple countries – tập đoàn đa quốc gia)
   Synonyms: global firms, international enterprises, transnational companies
   Antonyms: local firms, domestic companies, regional businesses
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “The expansion of multinational corporations has intensified global competition.”

8. retain (v: keep – duy trì)
   Synonyms: maintain, preserve, sustain
   Antonyms: lose, abandon, forfeit
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Global companies must ensure superior standards to retain customer loyalty.”

9. Peterson Institute for International Economics (n: a global research organization – Viện Kinh tế Quốc tế Peterson)
   Synonyms: economic think tank, policy institute, global research body
   Antonyms: none (proper noun)
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “A study by the Peterson Institute for International Economics revealed that globalization has led to a sharp decline in consumer prices.”>> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

🔹Difficult Grammar Structures

1. “I totally agree that this growing connection brings numerous benefits to societies.”
   → Complex clause with a that-clause as object
   → Tôi hoàn toàn đồng ý rằng mối liên kết ngày càng phát triển này mang lại nhiều lợi ích cho xã hội.

2. “When travelers visit foreign destinations, they are exposed to local customs and lifestyles, which broadens their horizons and nurtures tolerance.”
   → Complex sentence with an adverbial clause of time and a relative clause
   → Khi du khách đến những điểm đến nước ngoài, họ được tiếp xúc với phong tục và lối sống địa phương, điều này mở rộng tầm nhìn và nuôi dưỡng sự khoan dung.

3. “In today’s interconnected world, embracing diversity not only enhances social harmony but also lays the groundwork for lasting international friendships.”
   → “Not only... but also” parallel structure
   → Trong thế giới được kết nối ngày nay, việc chấp nhận sự đa dạng không chỉ tăng cường sự hòa hợp xã hội mà còn đặt nền tảng cho tình hữu nghị quốc tế bền vững.

4. “The expansion of multinational corporations has intensified global competition, driving prices down and improving the quality of goods and services.”
   → Present perfect with participle phrase for cause and effect
   → Sự mở rộng của các tập đoàn đa quốc gia đã làm gia tăng cạnh tranh toàn cầu, khiến giá giảm và cải thiện chất lượng hàng hóa và dịch vụ.

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