Phân tích "Due to pressure on the school and university students is increasing and students are pushed to hard work when they are young. Do you think it is a positive or negative for children’s development? Why? Discuss both sides of the view and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Due to pressure on the school and university students is increasing and students are pushed to hard work when they are young. Do you think it is a positive or negative for children’s development? Why? Discuss both sides of the view and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Due to pressure on the school and university students is increasing and students are pushed to hard work when they are young. Do you think it is a positive or negative for children’s development? Why? Discuss both sides of the view and give your opinion.

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Due to pressure on the school and university students is increasing and students are pushed to hard work when they are young —> việc này là positive 
    • Main idea 1: Facing challenges and working hard from a young age can instill strong work ethics, time management skills, and resilience, which are valuable attributes for success later in life
      • Supporting idea: These experiences teach individuals the importance of dedication, effective time utilization, and the ability to overcome obstacles, all of which are essential skills in various personal, academic, and professional endeavors.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: 
        • A child who volunteers at a soup kitchen learns the value of hard work and helping others.
        • A child who plays a musical instrument learns the importance of practice and discipline.
    • Main idea 2: Experiencing pressure and hard work early on can help children develop coping mechanisms and adaptability, preparing them for future professional challenges.
      • Supporting idea: The modern world is competitive and demanding.
      • Example: A study published in the journal "Child Development" found that children who experienced challenges early in life were more likely to develop coping mechanisms and resilience later in life. 
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Due to pressure on the school and university students is increasing and students are pushed to hard work when they are young —> việc này là negative & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Excessive pressure can lead to stress, anxiety, and burnout, adversely affecting children's mental health and overall well-being.
      • Supporting idea: The constant strain to meet high expectations and the lack of time for relaxation can overwhelm their psychological capacities, potentially resulting in negative emotions, deteriorating mental health, and a reduced ability to function effectively in various aspects of life.
      • Example: A study published in the journal "Child Development" found that children who experience excessive pressure from their parents are more likely to develop anxiety and depression. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
    • Main idea 2: Too much pressure can take away the joy of learning, turning education into a chore rather than a fulfilling pursuit of knowledge.
      • Supporting idea: The focus on performance and outcomes above all else can diminish students' intrinsic curiosity and enthusiasm, making them view learning as a means to an end rather than a process of exploration and personal growth.

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