Phân tích "Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays all over the world, people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits, TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays all over the world, people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits, TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays all over the world, people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits, TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: The convergence of media and brands can lead to cultural homogenization, where local traditions and identities may be overshadowed by a globalized culture. 
      • Supporting idea: This may result in the loss of unique cultural characteristics and the erosion of diversity.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
      • Example: McDonald's, for instance, has established a global presence with franchises in numerous countries. Its standardized menu, branding, and marketing strategies create a consistent experience for customers worldwide. As a result, local culinary traditions and food cultures can be overshadowed by the dominant presence of global fast-food chains.
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Global media and brands are often controlled by powerful multinational corporations, which can perpetuate socioeconomic inequalities and concentrate influence in the hands of a few dominant players. 
      • Supporting idea: This can undermine local industries and limit cultural representation.
      • Example: Companies like Google and Facebook, with their extensive reach and data-driven advertising platforms, have established a significant control over the global digital advertising industry. They have amassed vast amounts of user data, which they leverage to deliver targeted advertisements to a global audience.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: Exposure to diverse media from different countries promotes cultural exchange and understanding. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
        • Supporting idea: It allows people to appreciate and learn about different customs, traditions, and perspectives, fostering a more interconnected global community.
        • Example: K-pop has gained immense global popularity in recent years, reaching audiences beyond South Korea's borders. Through music streaming platforms, social media, and online video sharing platforms, K-pop has become easily accessible to people from diverse cultures and backgrounds.
      • Main idea 2: Access to the same TV shows, advertisements, and media content allows individuals to stay informed about global events, trends, and ideas.
        • Supporting idea: This can broaden people's knowledge, expand their horizons, and encourage a more global outlook.
        • Example: CNN and BBC are two prominent examples of international news networks that provide extensive coverage of global events and issues. Through their television channels, websites, and digital platforms, they deliver news content to audiences around the world.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: The convergence of media and brands can lead to cultural homogenization, where local traditions and identities may be overshadowed by a globalized culture. 
        • Supporting idea: This may result in the loss of unique cultural characteristics and the erosion of diversity.
        • Example: McDonald's, for instance, has established a global presence with franchises in numerous countries. Its standardized menu, branding, and marketing strategies create a consistent experience for customers worldwide. As a result, local culinary traditions and food cultures can be overshadowed by the dominant presence of global fast-food chains.
      • Main idea 2: Global media and brands are often controlled by powerful multinational corporations, which can perpetuate socioeconomic inequalities and concentrate influence in the hands of a few dominant players. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
        • Supporting idea: This can undermine local industries and limit cultural representation.
        • Example: Companies like Google and Facebook, with their extensive reach and data-driven advertising platforms, have established a significant control over the global digital advertising industry. They have amassed vast amounts of user data, which they leverage to deliver targeted advertisements to a global audience.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In this day and age, contemporary attention has increasingly been placed on the opinion that the boundaries between countries are becoming blurred as people around the world consume the same media. Despite some drawbacks of this development, I believe the benefits still outweigh the downsides.

On the one hand, I must admit that there are some disadvantages to this trend. Firstly, limiting one’s media consumption to outlets that feature news from around the world can mean being ignorant about local news. For example, a small piece of local information, such as a recent robbery, can get lost among the various news coming from around the world. As a result, many people can become insensitive to changes in their local community. Secondly, one might lose one’s cultural identity if following global media outlets carelessly. With the rising trend of the Korean entertainment industry, many people in Vietnam are adapting to the Korean lifestyle. This trend, while generally harmless, has, in extreme cases, led some young adults to degrade their own cultural identities and chase after foreign cultures.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

On the other hand, I believe the benefits still outweigh the downsides. Firstly, by following global news, we can learn about social issues happening in other countries and apply solutions to our own. For example, many Vietnamese, especially teenagers and young adults, were interested in the recent US presidential election. Many reported becoming more engaged in political issues in general. As a result, this year’s election in Vietnam saw a peak in engagement among young adults, with many discussions in online forums. Secondly, as more people watch the same media, like YouTube, it provides an opportunity to promote our own culture. For example, more international food bloggers and reviewers are visiting Vietnam because they saw videos and TV series about Vietnamese food on these global media outlets. As a result, the number of tourists to Vietnam has significantly increased.

In conclusion, I understand that there are some disadvantages to this globalization trend in media consumption. However, I think that the advantages brought by this development far outweigh the disadvantages.

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