Phân tích đề"Many university students live with their families while others live away from home because their universities are in different places" IELTS WRITING

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Many university students live with their families while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages both situations?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng advantages & disadvantages (nhớ là không hề hỏi opinion của BẢN THÂN, nên không đính kèm opinon trong intro & conclusion)
• Bài này có 2 cách làm:
  • Cách 1: 
    • Body 1: viết về university students live with their families (trong body 1 đó nêu luôn cả advantages & disadvantages)
    • Body 2: viết về university students live far away from home (trong body 1 đó nêu luôn cả advantages & disadvantages)
  • Cách 2:
    • Body 1: viết về advantages (trong body 1 phần đầu viết về advantages của university students live with their families, phần sau viết về advantages của university students live far away from home)
    • Body 2: viết về disadvantages (trong body 1 phần đầu viết về disadvantages của university students live with their families, phần sau viết về disadvantages của university students live far away from home)
• Có thể tham khảo các ý sau đây cùng IELTS TUTOR:
  • Live with their families
    • Pros:
      • Students can enjoy home comfort and get full support from their family and relatives. They can lead a disciplined life with the help of their parents  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ "support" tiếng anh
      • They are able to economize, since they do not have to pay for accommodation (IELTS TUTOR giải thích: they enjoy family support in terms of sharing meals, heating costs, possibly even sharing a room with a brother or sister HOẶC: Many parents are rich enough to pay for their children’s college expenses and this helps the students who live with their families to concentrate on their studies)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng từ"concentrate"tiếng anh
    • Cons:
      • Family routines are often disruptive for students who have to concentrate on their studies in a quiet atmosphere. Without a dedicated space in which to study, for example in the evenings or weekends, it is hard to keep up with a study schedule.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "dedicate" tiếng anh
  • Live away from home because their universities are in different places
    • Pros:
      • One can learn how to deal with a complex situation independently and maturely
      • It also helps them to firm their confidence to encounter the world full of challenges and obstacles (IELTS TUTOR giải thích: When a student starts living alone, he learns self-discipline by doing day to day activities. For instance, washing clothes, cooking meals and doing all other daily chores enables him to be independent and this is the main advantage of staying away from parents)
      • It also is a great opportunity to accomplish interpersonal skills  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "devote" tiếng anh 
      • It imparts the chance to be acquainted with others’ cultures, principles, and dogma
      • Students are able to escape the distractions of family life, and thereby establish study routines and form friendships with other students who find themselves in the same situation.
    • Cons:
      • One disadvantage is having to find accommodation. Universities are often located in major urban centres, where rents are high if students have to find a room with even the basic facilities.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Diễn đạt "cống hiến" tiếng anh (Paraphrase "devote /contribute")

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