Phân tích đề"Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil and natural gas, are the main source for many countries. However, some nations are using alternative energy such as solar power and wind power. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 14/8/2023)

Bên cạnh hướng dẫn sửa kĩ lưỡng đề thi SPEAKING IELTS ngày 4/8/2020 cho Hs IELTS TUTOR đi thi đạt 6.0, hôm nay IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề"Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil and natural gas, are the main source for many countries. However, some nations are using alternative energy such as solar power and wind power. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 14/8/2023)

Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil and natural gas, are the main source for many countries. However, some nations are using alternative energy such as solar power and wind power. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Bài này nếu đọc đề không kĩ thì sẽ không biết ý đề nói this is a positive or negative development, this ở đây là cái gì Many countries use fossil fuels such as coal or oil as the main sources of energy hay là However, in some countries the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged
• Ý đề này là đang muốn hỏi thí sinh liệu việc mà nay nhiều nước dùng nhiên liệu thay thế (alternative sources of energy) là tốt hay xấu
• Đọc kĩ hướng dẫn cách viết dạng Is it a positive or a negative development? mà IELTS TUTOR đã hướng dẫn
• Bố cục bài này sẽ chia như sau:
  • Intro câu 2: positive development for the reasons below 
  • Body 1: Firstly, lí do số 1 vì sao lại nghĩ đó là positive development 
    • Main idea: These sources are environmentally friendly, emitting significantly fewer greenhouse gases and pollutants compared to fossil fuels. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Example:  This reduction in emissions contributes to mitigating the impact of climate change and improving air quality, leading to healthier ecosystems and human populations.
    • Supporting idea: Iceland stands as a pioneering nation in renewable energy utilization, with approximately 87% of its electricity deriving from renewable sources, primarily hydropower and geothermal energy; the country is also actively advancing additional renewable energy initiatives, encompassing solar power and wind power.

  • Body 2: Secondly, lí do số 2 vì sao lại nghĩ đó là positive development 
    • Main idea: Alternative energy technologies often have lower operational costs and can promote energy independence>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
    • Example: This  is  because  they rely on renewable resources that are domestically available.
    • Supporting idea: Despite its small population of approximately 5.8 million people, Denmark holds a global forefront in alternative energy adoption, evidenced by renewable energy sources contributing to 40% of the country's electricity generation in 2020.

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