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Phân tích "Crime is a big problem all over the world, some people believe that we can do nothing to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

August 30, 2023

Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Crime is a big problem all over the world, some people believe that we can do nothing to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

Crime is a big problem all over the world, some people believe that we can do nothing to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

  • Main idea 1: If a criminal has to pay more money for doing something illegal or would have to face more time in prison, then I believe this is likely to reduce the crime rate.
    • Supporting idea: Stricter sets of laws are required, and the penalties should be corresponding to the severity of the wrongdoings
    • Example: In a variety of countries, such as the United Kingdom or Italy, the capital punishment has been abandoned; but I believe it should be reintroduced as the fear of death may deter the potential offenders and stop them from committing serious crime. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng "restriction" tiếng anh
  • Main idea 2: Methods to increase security might deter potential criminals
    • Supporting idea: 
      • If there is a shortage of police budgets and staffing, the government can establish a community watch, a program that involves citizens working with others to reduce crime.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Governments can increase the numbers of police in local communities and more ‘neighbourhood watch’ schemes should be encouraged, both of which increase safety and deter crime HOẶC  If more police were on the streets, whether on foot or on patrol cars, criminals would be less likely to commit crime and people would feel much safer)>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "gap" tiếng anh
      • Hidden security cameras like surveillance cameras can be used in homes with the help of which people can watch what is happening in their homes from anywhere

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